It's not what you're saying. Your playing it like a typical day game taught all over the world. And that structure and method works.
That just leaves how you're saying and the sub text. Essentially your delivery is probably off. And your inner state is probably the cause of it.
Inferring from the fact that you like to introduce your full long name and make a joke about how long it is and "we'll start with first names". I can tell your going to give off a creepy vibe. Your one of those that give off that very proper and most often geeky types that doesn't realise what he's doing wrong socially.
That happens to be the hard part though. But it CAN be changed with some effort and over time.
Body language, micro expression, gestures etc .... It's hard, especially to micro manage. My advise, like I've given other forumers here, is to focus on your state. Ask yourself, are you trying to "get anything" from them in set. By that I mean, are you thinking, ok I need to impress this girl, or ok she's out oft league but I'm going to just give it a shot. Because then you're doing it wrong.
Don't. Start taking a different perspective. Think ok I'm a cool confident guy, and this is just a nice interaction cause I live talking to hot girls. Prize yourself, enjoy the process and eliminate all indicators that you "want" something from them using thought.
I wrote an article on Pua-training, gamblers pick up blog titled: The Mind: 2 cutting edge ways to generate attraction for the intelligent man. I suggest you check that out, I'm not gonna post everything here again.
http://www.puatraining.com/blog/the-min ... ligent-man
Gotta change your approach to everything, and you should start with your thoughts and come from a more macro perspective.
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