So I mainly use Okc and POF for online game.
After a lot of trial and error I created this profile, with a lot of the help of some of you guys on here, and here it is: http://www.okcupid.com/profile/TheNatur ... le_similar

1) Please critique it
2) Please give me a basic game plan of what I should do from open to close. Feel free to go in detail.

I think it's really good but maybe there's something missing.
I send out TONS of messages on here and get very few responses, and when the girls do respond it barely goes anywhere. On the flip side, if the girl is cool and she's talkative, yes, I'll close her and get her #. But I want to erase everything I know about opening girls on online game. I usually her, "X I thought you were cute and had to see if there was more to you aside from the X."

Please teach me the proper way to open a girl on here that gets responses. Please show me what should happen to beginning to close.

P.S. I want to make this clear, my convos can work great with online game but it's not perfected. I have an understanding of it, but I want to learn even more!

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Man that line about grandma being #1 fan cracked me up. Is that yours or did you grab it from somewhere?

Don't change your profile. it's brilliant. Pics are awesome too.

I am willing to bet that your messages are lame if you ain't seeing results.

Please post up your message transcripts.

Also, try POF too. I think POF is way better than OKCupid

Tinder is where it is at though but most people don't put in an about me section so just use your coolest pic and work with the girls that 'like' you.

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I think your pictures are very pretentious especially coupled with the text. They don't really show much of you or the real you. They're all filtered and blurry which is something chicks aren't keen on because they know for a fact that those blurry, filtered images make you look better than you would normally. Think of all the tricks women use in their photos to make them skinnier, look more attractive and give a better impression. They use them because most guys haven't a clue about them and only think they look attractive. Your pictures simply don't give a very accurate image of what you look like.

Blurry images hide what you really look like and they can make you look more skinnier or more attractive(Because a lot of your facial features are blurred or hidden leaving your mind to fill in the gaps). You're also posing in pretty much every picture save the one where you're playing your guitar on stage and then you have a picture of you and a girl who looks like she could be a girlfriend. It's good to have pictures of you with some women so it's known you're comfortable around women and know how to treat them but when you have them hanging out of you it's not the best of pictures to have(Same goes for men. What do you think when you see a chick in a picture hanging out of a guy? It's kind of a turn off). Get rid of the filters and try put up some pictures of you just smiling and having a laugh with some friends. Be more natural in your photos.

Another thing is in your profile you talk big -- a little too big -- yet your "personality tab shows you as having very low confidence." Women are going to see this and think you're a poser. You just come across as arrogant in your self-summary and women don't like that. You might want to redo your profile around who you are and not who you want to be... Your profile text comes across as way too random and unstructured as if you're posting random, obnoxious quotes and passing them off as your own. It's cool that you're trying to be funny but there's too much randomness there and way too much text for someone that's just going to be skimming through your profile. Try to tease them with basic info about yourself and throw in some nuggets of information that chicks dig such as your star sign(Women check this out and want to know your compatibility -- it's chick crack all this mystic stuff). Also, remove the whole "Don't message me if you're a stripper and you're not down to earth." It just comes across as being an asshole.

That's just what I see what I opened your profile. TheFury is pretty much the resident online PUA so get his input on it.

I would cut down on the self-summary and give a bit of information on yourself. What you've done there is pretty much give very limited information that really isn't relevant or all that clear. Just keep with KISS(Keep It Simple Stupid).

Guys thank you all for the feedback. Pretty much a lot of the stuff on there I made, I just got inspired by GKS' stuff. I think, the stuff I wrote on there was good, most of the girls that open me (even tho they're not attractive) constantly tell me how much they love my profile.

I just made some minor changes. Letting them know I joke around a lot so it'll balance things out and people won't think I'm being serious (cause I'm not). I'll comment more when I have more time, but Game, I think there's a misunderstanding about the stuff I wrote. I didn't say I have low confidence, this is how it appeared on my screen http://imgur.com/Kg2JaQr where did you see that?

I'll get to more later, but for the pictures you're totally right. I'll make adjustments later. For now I shortened it and balanced it out so people know I'm joking. Let me know your thoughts I'll post up my messages soon. If you guys could explain the second part about what to say, I'd appreciate it. Thanks

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It shows it in your Personality "He Might Be..." section. There's a graph and confidence is way down there.

Also, have you tried raising the age of the women you would be interested in? Say 20-35 or so. There's a lot of hot cougars out there and you genuinely wouldn't believe they're in their 30s. There's a surprisingly high amount of older women looking for a younger toy boy to fuck them raw. Look into it! Might even learn something!!

I just found that section and erased all my answers so, that part is completely deleted. The low confidence thing may have stopped some girls from messaging me. When I answered those questions on Okc, I just answered randomly to see what it did. I got rid of it all together and now I'm at 0% match with all girls. Which I think may be better?

So game, you made an interesting statement, " Your pictures simply don't give a very accurate image of what you look like." I'd like to comment on some of the stuff you mentioned. I don't think the written section is try hard, like I said, imo I think it's entertaining and funny. I'm naturally witty and like that (when I'm in state) that's just me. So I feel congruent with that profile.

As for the pictures, the Blur pic of me was actually a mistake in the photo lol. But I get it, it paints me more as being indirect with woman and they can't make a mental connection with who I am. I have lots of ideas on how to make it more personal, I'll work with some of it and get back to you. Albeit, I do have one pic up on there of me looking straight in the cam? I'll try to add more natural stuff, definitely, but I think I look good in them. A girl recently called me sexy and I'm content with that.

Btw, I sent you a PM, let me know if you got it and what you think of it. Thanks!

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Changed the pics of it. Version 1
Thoughts?

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I agree. I think profiles like this are more funny to bros than intriguing and attractive to girls. Too random. Be balanced..... communicate some passion and mix it up with a random line. But as it is its too random and forced.

Profile is decent, bud.

I'm not a huge fan of the pic that has the word "rape" in it - even though it's being used jokingly.

You have a lot of selfies - you need more pics with other people - taken by other people.

Also - puppies.

Find someone in a park. Ask for a photo with their puppy.

Seriously. Puppies.

I don't really take many photos of myself or have them with other people but I'm going to get creative and take some new ones, hopefully with puppies, ha.

Btw, I noticed one of the guys on here actually made the same name as me and used my exact profile word for word. You're Welcome bud! I wanted to create the ultimate (written profile) and I'm really pleased with the verbal aspect. Pics need to be updated. So far, I took a lot down, and got like 4 pics up.

Now I think my main problem is messaging. I have no idea what to open with. My msg's don't get as many responses as I'd like. What would you guys recommend.

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Profile Ver 2 is up

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