Hey all!

I've noticed that my text game is nowhere near what I want it to be, so with that being said, I would greatly appreciate it if you could give me some tips/critique my text game so I can improve. Thanks!

Here are some examples:

#1
Me: My new second favorite sport (link showing the benefits of pole dancing as she had expressed interest in taking a class.
Her: Lol exactly why I wanna take classes
Me: Let's do it! I already know my stripper name
Her: Lol. Let's! What's your stripper name>
Me: Diamond because I'm not cheap. Hbu?
Her: Haha! That's perfect for you. I have no idea what my stripper name can be lol
Me: I need to take you to a strip club. I remember that time you really wanted to go
Her: I want to go to a REAL strip club
Me: If you play your cards right we'll go
She didn't reply to this so I didn't text her back

#2
Me: Hey dork
Her: Hey loser
Me: What's popping X?
Her: I'm at X's concert, you?
Me: I can't believe you are there too. I don't see you (I wasn't really there)
Her: I thought you weren't coming liar?
Me: I wasn't until I won backstage passes in the radio. Don't tell me you didn't see my Snapchat? (She doesn't have a Snapchat)
Her: You're lying, you're not really here lol
Me: I can't believe you don't trust me
Her: You're Southern Gent
Me: Don't tell me you want a picture of me with The Artist
Her: Yes I do!
Me: Check my Snapchat, just be careful with the dick pics
She didn't reply back but the next day she texted me at night saying come to club X

So yeah...I know my text game isn't that tight, but I want to improve.

I actually don't mind your text game too much at all. You have lots of fun, it isn't too stock and gamey.

I think you probably overcooked your other message when you said 'if you play your cards right' that just took the cocky a little further than it needed to go. You already had the upper hand.

You could have simply written 'DONE! Let's go to X strip club on wed night at 8'

And you should have scored the date.

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