I was wondering if you guys could critique my Text Game, with this girl I met on Tinder, the current conversation is still on Tinder, but I'll post below! Let me know what you guys think and what changes I should make and what to do next, I'd really appreciate it. Most of the things I do, I've learned from this site and videos that were posted.

Me: I liked you and you liked me... let's get together and get white girl wasted off of a case of beer and try to remember our drunken night together in the morning
HB: Wow let's get weird
Me: Hell yeah, I like your style. What kind of beer should we abuse?
HB: Platinums
HB: Easy to abuse and more abusive
Me: I think we're in for a rough night all around with that pick, I'm game
HB: Hahahaha for sure
Me: Play your cards right and I might show you some of my stripper moves , I'm (My Name) btw haha

that's the conversation so far, she hasn't replied...

But I would love your guys opinions and thoughts on how I should continue on with my game, tweaks I should make, next moves, etc.

Me: I liked you and you liked me... let's get together and get white girl wasted off of a case of beer and try to remember our drunken night together in the morning
thats terribly weird to say. remember she doesnt know you, and your mission is to get her to see that you are just a normal guy, not one of the 1000 weirdos in tinder.
what you should say is something like
"i know guys have said this to you a thousand times
but you are really beautiful i like your ........(eyes, smile)"
HB: Wow let's get weird
Me: Hell yeah, I like your style. What kind of beer should we abuse?
you owned it and she decided to give you the benefit of the doubt
HB: Platinums
HB: Easy to abuse and more abusive
Me: I think we're in for a rough night all around with that pick, I'm game
HB: Hahahaha for sure
you were doing grate with that save
Me: Play your cards right and I might show you some of my stripper moves , I'm (My Name) btw haha
what you said was super douchey. remember you are trying to build trust, your mission is to get her trust to the point she's like "hey, add me to facebook" or "lets SPAM". this does happen to me all the time, and when i just had downloaded the app no girl would answer, so i know where you come from

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and avoid words like abuse, you dont want that kind of thing in her mind when you are trying to get get to go have a drink and spend a few hours with a stranger.

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HB mentioned abuse but, is it a SNL? If so, stripper moves might work as it projects confidence almost cockiness. Id say its congruent with the previous statements. Just don't disappoint.

are you really a stripper / do you have awesome stripper moves?

it sounds like you might be writing (weird) checks your body can't cash ..

95% of guys either come off with c/f or are overtly sexual with a woman on Tinder right off the bat.

You want to be playful (without coming off as trying to be the court jester) but not creepy.

Women aren't stupid -they're quite intuitive. And unless they're a walking STD they're not going say yes to something sexual without first being attracted to the guy.

I tend to see what she throws out. If she's good with banter it's game on. If she's dry and boring I find someone who amuses me and can banter (I have realized it's not worth screwing boring women because when I'm done I just want them to leave my house and they tend to sit around asking me stupid questions).

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i just really think the first priority is to establish that YOU are not some weird ass internet fuck who is weird and picks up chicks of the internet. and your opener didn't really do that.

forget this one and try again.