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I'm a Computer Science student and kind of a nerd. I'm passionate about volunteering through various organizations on campus, specifically with children. I do part-time coding for MU and I'm also a superhero, no big deal. I'm very ambitious about all things in life (in case you were just so excited to read this you skipped the above section). My goal is to run my own software development company relatively soon after graduation. Traveling is awesome, if you don't agree, we probably won't get along. Chivalry is not dead so if you're one of those who has a fit about having the car door opened for you because you can "do it yourself" just stop. Be prepared for some sarcasm, I can't help it.
I firmly believe that happiness is a choice, not a result of external circumstances.
I would remove the following words/phrases:
"(in case you were just so excited to read this you skipped the above section)"
"relatively"
"if you don't agree, we probably won't get along" (I'd try writing something different about travel, express your passion a bit more and don't put anything negative in there)
"firmly"
I would re-write "Chivalry is not dead so if you're one of those who has a fit about having the car door opened for you because you can "do it yourself" just stop."
Good sentiment but a bit confrontational. Rather than telling them off, be a bit more screening about it:
"Chivalry is not dead so I'm not looking for one of those girls who has a fit about having the car door opened for them"
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