So got a number close on pof. I feel I am getting somewhere but still feels like I am forcing the texting convo :/any advice?

Me:Ahh that's shit :/ where do you work? Xx
Her:----- xx
Me:Are you working now? Xx
Her: not til 1:30 xx
Me: okk what's the discount like? Xx
Her: shit hahaha, it's like 20% off full price and 10% off sale items xx
Me: Better than nothing!! You able to get me a discount? xx
Her:if I lived with you yes lol xx
Me: Ahh your gonna have to buy me a drink first before you ask me to live with you! :S xx
Her: lol very true xx

I know this is veeeerrry sloppy from a pua point of view, but I feel I can get a date out of this. Any advice on how to work this into a smooth date offer. I haven't replied yet.

Cheers guys!

Should I just ask now?

Asked and date sorted.
Then a 21 yr old HB7 opened me and asked for my number (she is real ) just chatted on the phone with her and another date sorted. First 2 ever. Not bad for a 19 ur old virgin who looks like a 10 year old