http://www.pof.com/member30015938.htm

I've been getting the occasional message back, i'd say about a 20% response rate. Just looking to improve my profile.

Profile is good but get some professional pics taken and put those up. Online game is really just about the pics more than anything else.

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Yeah, good idea. Check out one of those Olan Mills studios or maybe a portrait place in the mall.

http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=58365718

I get occasional replies, they are usually one worded. Most just look at the profile and then don't hit me up again. Any tips on what's wrong with it?

I usually agree with W.M., but in this case I don't. Unlike men, most girls do look at profiles- yours sucks.

First your pictures aren't good, get rid of the one where you are winning the good citizen certificate and that other one where you look like an unsmiling curmudgeon. Get one with some attractive woman and ones in which you are looking socially dominant.

Change your name, Airforceguy8756 is boring and uninspired. Also have someone else write your profile or copy someone else's, you start every sentence with "I" and it makes you seem uneducated. In addition you are telling them how cool you are rather then implying or showing - bad game. They have no reason to believe you especially in light of your pictures. You are saying some of the right things but in the wrong way.

One word replies mean they are not interested, I dont even respond to those.