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stringfellow on sticks
 Post subject: Opinions on my profile??
PostPosted: Sat Oct 12, 2013 12:51 pm 
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Guys,

Any opinions/feedback on my POF profile would be great! Thanks!

http://www.pof.fr/fr_viewprofile.aspx?p ... d=31823854
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 14, 2013 8:09 pm 
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completely boring and generic. Think outside the box.

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stringfellow on sticks
PostPosted: Mon Oct 14, 2013 9:52 pm 
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Ok. Any suggestions on how to make it better?

As far as photos go, the ones I have on my profile are LITERALLY the only ones I have!
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 15, 2013 4:54 am 
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I'd take out some of the exclamation points. It's too high-energy and will come off as quasi-bipolar or fake. Also, don't say you aren't arrogant. Actually, don't even mention anything negative. Don't say you aren't a workaholic. It's better to say that you work hard and play harder or something like that (it's cliched but still good).

The part about no apologies is good.

You need to say something about you that makes you unique, something that your target audience can find from no one else.
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stringfellow on sticks
PostPosted: Tue Oct 15, 2013 8:10 am 
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Ok, thanks. I'll see what I can come up with!
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 19, 2013 11:17 am 
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Is this any better?

It's (very) short! But I just thought I'd eliminate all the "needless" stuff!

Thoughts?
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JJoj
PostPosted: Sun Oct 20, 2013 6:24 am 
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It's not bad. Some girls want to see complete sentences in profiles.
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 20, 2013 12:35 pm 
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