Here is my profile diescription for the site I'm using. I'd like to get everyone's advise on what it says. I based it off of what I heard from Bravo in a video on youtube, but it doesn't seem to be working too well. Tell me what you think and how I could improve it.

I can be an asshole, but my friends also tell me I'm an awesome guy to be with. I have some pretty high standards and need my girl to be interesting. At this moment in my life I'm really looking more to have fun and not settle down (much to several girls's dissappointments).

I'm heading to college for a degree in psychology. I am also working on getting a novel published.

If I don't message you back immediately, I apologize in advance. I've been pretty busy lately.

P.S. I could also use some online openers as well. I was using the one that Bravo recommends where you ask them how long it would take for them to get ready for dinner and if youd starve to death but that's been a hit or miss thing. I'm 18 and would like to get some targets around my age.

Some guys like these type of profiles but I personally think these profiles are not great. You want to show exclusivity in a positive way. Girls don't know you have any value whatsoever when they open your profile, so a lot of times these "i'm picky and too good for you" profiles do not have their desired effect, but instead have the effect of: "Who does this dbag think he is being all picky?" With that said, it's still way better than the typical: "I'm a cool laid back guy who is close to my family and friends" so props on that.

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Here's what I've changed my profile to. Do you think it's an improvement? What are some problems you think there might be with it?

I'm an asshole, but if you're interested in me then I pretty much require that you have self respect. That's a very important requirement for me.

I was raised by wolves when I was younger and had to fend for myself in order to survive. Pretty much I just had a normal childhood.

I'm pretty busy so I might not message you back immediately