| So here I go then. This is what I first think before reading your profile.
You choose to write these things, you choose what to write about, your choose what to convey about you.
Thinking about this before you start typing stuff can be very helpful.
1. Your picture is not good. Its blurry and doesn't really tell much.
Do not take a picture of yourself by yourself. Let a friend take one.
And have as good pictures on OkCupid as possible.
When you're well groomed and have nice clothes on you. And maybe with a nice background.
A picture is worth more than 1000 words.
2. Words. Words are the way we describe ourselves. These are powerful.
You can describe yourself in endless type of ways, and all these ways describes you as a person in a certain way. Try to remember that, because that is powerful. It is more powerful when you can use it successfully when talking to girls. I will give you an example of some things I thought you could have done better.
3. You dont have to tell people everything, I think you are way to open, leave somethings for the girls to discover about you. That is way more powerful than reading it directly on your page. And it can also help you finding your IOI's.
Like
What I’m doing with my life
"Going to college for a dual degree in mechanical engineering and aerospace engineering. I am also taking flying lessons on the side. I want to be a pilot maybe. I like thrills. I just want to be happy in life though that is what I'm doing"
Dont use the word maybe, that is like "I want to become a pilot maybe, but I dont really know what I want."
this is what I've would have written
What I'm doing with my life.
Im going to college to study. And at the side of college I will be continuing taking my flying lessons.
It has been a childhood dream of mine to become a pilot.
This conveys alot more interesting facts about you, than what you wrote.
1. You're going to college.
2. You have ambitions. You have goals in life.
3. You're proving that you know what you want in life.
When she asks you what you are going to study in college, you will say that mechanical aerospace thing.
It will all make sence in her mind that WOW, this dude really follows his dreams. And thats fucking attractive.
He has something figured out that my ex/my friends/myself/people dont.
4. I dont buy that you are too busy, you seem like you have all the free time in the world.
Playing video games, watching tv shows, watching sports.
As I said, words are powerful. Like "When I have time I usually read thrillers, anime what so ever"
5. The first things people notice about me. "my height and my eyes"
man, you long fucking giraff, I would make a joke out of this one! it shows your sense of humor.
I would write "Firstly its obviously my height (1.98 cm), and some people have complimented on my beautiful eyes too."
6. The six things I could not live without. You had a good answer, but you told it in a bad way.
I would write "Friends and family comes first and my dreams and aspirations are just as important to me.
I also think its important to get some kind of physical activity during the week.
7. Dude.. seriously? Thinking about girls? Since you're already a member of OkCupid isnt it clear that you are interested in girls already? hahaha!!. Okay, so I should probably try to convey something attractive here.
Spending alot of time thinking about life, relations, success, health.
8. The most private thing you are willing to admit.
I would answer, Im willing to admit it privatly, I will guarantee you the best laugh of your life!
When a girl asks, you can insert a great conversation about a funny story or what so ever.
Your self summary.
Take away the "I know what I want in life part" We have aldready managed to make it better now.
Take away "Sports and activity". Actually, take away everything and start over. We have already gone
trough everything. And now it seems like you have been telling the same things about you
over and over. So make that one about yourself, why should they talk to you? what do you have to offer that other guys dont, what makes you stand out.
I hope this helps dude!
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There are 2 kinds of people when you boil it all down, you got your talkers and you got your doers.
Most people are just talkers, all they got is talk, but when all said is done it's the doers who change this world.
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