Its hilarious but i doubt it would work. I wanted to share the basics of it and get opinions.
i added some stuff i thought might work...
You take some note cards to a bar, fill them out with whatever, pickup lines the cheesier the better.

You sit at the bar reading them
when you see a HB you approach, while reading the cards.
trip(DO NOT FALL), slightly just before you get to the HB

look at the cards, look at her...say nothing
look at the cards, shuffle a bit and drop a line on her.
no matter her reaction(unless she runs for the hills)
shuffle the cards and act nervous
look at the cards shuffle again and fumble all the cards dropping them
bend over to pick them up(good chance for a kino here)
look up at her and say "jeez i don't have a card to help me with someone like you." (or something like that, no compliments just generalisms)
i'd guess by now the entire bar has noticed your antics
tell her hey, i'm kind of embarrassed about all this would you like to go outside and talk?
(this is where it gets shaky imo)^
you could also lose the outside request and drop the AFC and say "i did not need the cards anyways, after seeing your ____(general compliment not body related) i know who i want to talk to. (be as alpha as possible to counteract the nerdy card routine)

beyond this i do not know where you could take this, but i read it and it seemed like it had some potential. maybe even for street game.

This sounds like a great social freedom exercise, but there's no way I'm doing this with the goal of actually picking up girls.

_________________
My Journal (from AFC to MPUA, still a work in progress)

no offence man but this is tooo much thinking for just picking up a girl....

i like originality but this is too silly and long. and why would you want to take a girl outside and talk when you haven't even said hardly a word in the place? weird

This is perhaps the worst idea ever.

_________________
That's my $0.02

-Bluesy

like i said it is something i read, its not my idea. It seemed cornball and cheeky when i read it. But being the intellectual person i am i thought about it. I tore it apart in my head and wondered.

Also, like i said...The outside thing could be changed or removed. But with some tweaking i think this could work in the right environment.

Here's the thing bro... I want to ask you a question. Can you define what "work" means to you? You mean "work to get you laid" or "work to open a set?" Because all this would be is an opener. An opener will not get you laid nor will it actually get you "rejected." You can not determine how every girl would react to this or any opener... But what you can do is try it on 10 girls, see how receptive they are, and really check it out for yourself by measuring your results. I am really encouraging you to be curious is all this is. If you think something will work, try it. If you are skeptical about something working but you want to try it, try it anyways. All it will do is teach you something.

I did something similar once. I found a Dating for Dummies book online for 5 dollars. Approached a couple girls in the mall with the book up to my head and said "So...come here often?" It got me smiles, but it was just an opener. You need some more stuff to back it up.

One of my rules is to not go out with the actual intent of picking up women. I hope you see how that could blow a spot.

With that being said, you might be onto something. As the above poster said, it can be an okay opener. If you approach a girl and ask her to pick a card, but to not read it. Take it and read the line. Not saying I would suggest doing this, but it could get a laugh and if I saw you doing this, I'd give you a wink for trying.

_________________
A morning of awkwardness is far better than a night of loneliness.

18 Body Language Mistakes I Bet You're Making