Guys, i need some constructive feedback on the following Facebook conversation i had
with a HB 9 recently…..

I have laid it out for you guys to see it step by step and could
help me out with your constructive feedback on how you would have continued this conversation and on what line you would have used differently to keep her hooked into
this conversation and gone for a number close….

A lill back ground, i went to school with this girl and now she lives
in New You and i m in UK...



Original

Line 1
ME - someone's been hittin the gym lately ..
HB - I dont know how to take that comment?!

Line 2
ME - are you takin that green dress?
HB - Well Idk what u talking abt?!

Line 3

ME - dont tell me you forgot abt this (this is where is sent her a link to the picture she uploaded on Facebook)
HB - Idk what u mean by this pic?!

Line 4
Me - imagine yourself, wearing that dress in the pic....window shopping in Oxford street London with your best friends..
HB - Lol who is this best friend u r referring to?

Line 5
Me - lol..so you did imagine...
HB - I imagined shopping but without a friend.

Line 6

Me - oh.. so you r one of thm...
HB - No clue what u mean by that

Line 7
Me - i see u'r in new york... do have that jolly kim kardashian type accent...
HB - Lol why kim? Why not just a New Yorker accent?!

Line8
Me - hey stop teasing me with all these questions ... im begining to get into my interview mode...

and this is where she stops replying back….



Any Suggestions?

Wow, this was horrible. I can't understand wtf you were even saying. It sounds like you are just trying to be mysterious and shit. Unfortunately, that only works if you are making any sense whatsoever which you were not. You just came off like some confused idiot. Stop trying to just blindly copy PUA lingo and piece together lines you see. Stop. Think. Understand what the underlying theory is behind the random example you ripped off and then apply it in a way that makes sense for the situation.

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