Okay so I'm back "sarging" online using PoF. This is my 3rd profile, i had older one a year ago which I had success with but it only attracted certain types of girls. My 3rd is generating more responses, but I'm not entirely sure if I'm giving too much away. Tips/Criticisms appreciated

My PoF ID 55261133 go check it out on the website, or read ahead!

About Me, Myself and Daniel

Okay, by the heading you can tell I have three sides, but actually I have many more, it’s just so hard to choose which one to talk about first!

I’ll start with my two main passions are Computing and Psychology. Computing is my chosen Career Path, and Psychology is a side interest which helps me become a better person. I love the learning process that comes with complex subjects like these, and when I piece something together in either subject, it gets me bouncing off the walls in excitement!

I have the desire to travel across the world and experience different cultures, I’d also like to explore spirituality and learn how to dance. If you’re a foodie great!, you’ll have to cook me a cuisine, maybe something I haven’t had before? I love food.

As you will surely tell, I have a nerdy personality and I find humour in the most stupid things, I like to keep things entertaining and fun, girls who I can act silly with and who like to converse in friendly exchanges of teasing remarks surely do it for me .

I have a varied taste when it comes to music, I’m mainly into Alternative/Rock but I do like a few songs from the mainstream and I have a thing for the 80’s! Even though I’m not all that great at dancing, I still love to have a Jig’ to the rhythm and the beats of a great song.

I’m a huge fan of Survival Horror and as a lover of video games, I still think the best games come from the 1990s, especially old PlayStation classics like Resident Evil, Spyro and Crash Bandicoot! Now I have to ask, is there a girl out there that knows how to win at a game of Tekken without bashing every single button? lol

Movies.. Also varied, but I’m into mostly action, thrillers, horrors, comedies and maybe the odd feel good chick flick.. but shhh! When it comes to movies however, the classics I watched back I were a kid, like Lethal Weapon, Die Hard, Terminator, Beverly Hills Cop will always remain deep within my heart!

If you’ve watched any of these TV Series;
- Breaking Bad
- Dexter
- Suits
- The Walking Dead
Well done; if you’ve seen them all you’re super!

Okay this is all you're getting, if you want to find out more then I look forward to your message

Hey man. My only comment is that this seems a little long and maybe too genuine. If you feel it's been working, then keep with it. But from what I've found, chicks seem to reply back more if you have a witty/cocky personality on your profile. Maybe incorporate some of that and test?

Happy playing.

Hey thank you for your response.

I'm getting a lot more of responses and I manage to get the girls phone numbers, but setting up a date seems to be troublesome. I think I'm putting myself in LTR Provider frame in their minds, so they want me to work for it.

My other profile I managed to meet two girls within one week.

This is my 2nd profile I wrote, its a story and some girls liked the sound of it and prompted them to want to meet me.

About Me

I’m 23 years of age; I’m average build with blue eyes, brown hair etc. I’m just an average guy on the outside right?

Imagine this, we've met up for an afternoon drink and we’re sat down at a table in the corner of the bar, there is a busy SPAM with many people having their own conversations. Once we begin talking, you notice that I’m optimistic about life, you notice I’m passionate about my interests, you notice the charm in my smile and the way I express my interest in you makes you feel comfortable. As we share our interests and stories, we battle in a friendly exchange of teasing remarks, we make silly jokes about the place we’re in and we’re genuinely having a fun time with no pressure. As we vibe we’re constantly learning things about each other, you’re learning about how I’m going about my career path in Computing, the types of music and movies I enjoy, my interest in psychology, the crazy things I have done, the activities I enjoy doing, how I enjoy a good cuppa’ tea and what I like to eat etc. Most importantly, we're discovering the things we would enjoy doing together. So I ask, what will I be learning about you?
Daniel

Date
If bars aren't your thing, we can take the relevance of this situation into an Infinite number of different locations and scenes. That’s the beauty of this whole process it’s simple No expectations, no pressure, if we both feel attraction, great we’ll let nature takes it course. In the short case, we become friends.

I think the story will work with a certain type of woman, i.e., the genuine type. But if you're younger (21-26), a lot of the chicks in that age group may be looking for something a little more playful.

But whatever works, dude, keep it up. Just get the digits and try to set up dates ASAP.

I don't like either of these. The header and the theme are KEY with online dating. I am already bored after the first line of these. You need a catchy first line. Reading a first line of someone describing themselves as average in basically every way, in their header, is definitely not what I want as a woman. Don't focus on what you are average at, focus on what you are great at and make that your profile. A profile does not need to have much information, it needs to catch the eye of a prospective woman with the header and get them to click in side.

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Oh my, why don't you write a novel about yourself. No offense, these are the worst type of profiles. How about short and to the point.

"I'm a young professional looking to meet a smart, attractive girl. I'm funny and easy going. My idea of fun is __date 1____and ____date 2____. I enjoy slip & slides and mud wrestling (be light on this part!). I'd write more but then there's no mystery....

I'm looking or a girl who is ___ , ____, ____. Someone who wants to learn new things together. I prefer women without tattoos or piercings. Feel free to shoot me a message "


Bam, came up with that in 3 minutes. DO NOT write a novel like profile for online dating. Less is MORE when it comes to online dating.

This is definitely better than the OPs, but I would NOT go with the "looking for girl with so and so qualifications" This is what I call an exclusionary component which is unnecessary in online dating. The more view/email you, the merrier, you can always choose to ignore later.

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I like it but maybe it's too revealing and no mystery involved that could make her curious to ask about you.