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Sanojio
 Post subject: OKC Critique boys
PostPosted: Sun May 26, 2013 10:51 pm 
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http://www.okcupid.com/profile/jramsey10

I get an ok response rate but as you can tell from my profile I don't take it too serious. Any suggestions? Constructive criticism welcome, just not asshole criticism. lol
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dlightmen
 Post subject: Re: OKC Critique boys
PostPosted: Mon May 27, 2013 12:11 am 
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Actually not bad at all. It's written very well, I might add. You may want to add some variety to your pictures though.

I'd leave the written part as is.
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TheFury
 Post subject: Re: OKC Critique boys
PostPosted: Wed May 29, 2013 5:56 pm 
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It's pretty decent actually. A Bit long on the section about the movies etc. One thing I would do is change your login name to a catchy header or name, not just jramsey. Unlike other dating sites where you can have a headline, a good catchy profile name gives you a little added boost.

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