http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=34885935

Any ideas or hints would be superb!

Hmm the first paragraph has a lot of "I like this but i like that" statements. Like saying brunettes are my thing but I like blondes too. Or I like girls with a sense of humour but I like girls who are serious too. Its a bit wishy washy and not direct. I guess it depends on what you are trying to project. Are you a man who is in control and knows what he wants or are you trying to cater for all women and bend and mold to what they are looking for? The alpha way is to get them to conform to you..

the last paragraph sounds like you are looking for a wife and love straight off the bat. This could deter a few would be ladies. I would tone this down a fair bit and keep it more casual. Remember this is internet dating and woman already have their guard up with all the creeps. The more casual you have it to begin with the more likely they will interact with you without thinking you are going to stalk them

good luck

hm you are honest in your description, cant be wrong. you obviously dotn look for ONS, which sure girls appreciate. if a girl is romantic and reads your text, guess you will win
but i doubt any crazy chicks would like that

-about pics, here's my general advice

a. good pic of myself
b. pic of me doin crazy stuff like skydive
c. pic with male friends hanging out
d. pic with some hot females (pre selection)
c. party pic
d. pic of you playing a insturment, painting, whatever special skills you can do!

-if you dont have any of these pics, make something crazy! dont photoshop

-you write you are around water. add pics of you having fun there =) if possible, max out and at those 8 pics

Here's mine, feel free to adapt some style, just dont copy paste
http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=46477396

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It is kinda blah! You need to think outside the box and don't put the same shit every other dude on the site puts!

You can go extreemly out there so that anyone knows it is not real, but shows your are witty, funny, creative, crazy (good kind). You don't have to tell someone you are a great guy if they can see it for themselves, you don't have to tell a girl you are funny if she can see it in your writing. You are attractive enough but this profile probably gets passed over more often than not.

Here is what I have on my POF (Some original, some taken from here and there)

About me:
When I go to Wendy's, the whole menu changes to .99 cents. I invented self vacuuming carpet and wrote the theme song to Gilligan's Island. I'm 6' on paper but 6'10" when you tickle me. I have more fun than my neighbors, except when they are having a LOT of fun! When you meet me, the pleasure will be all yours. I don’t fantasize because they always come true. I don't follow fashion because it is always a step behind. Critic’s worldwide swoon over my original line of Corduroy evening wear. I once counted to infinity, and yes, I showed my math! I can cook a four course meal using only a spatula and a toaster oven.

I’m phenomenal in bed! Seriously…you should see me sleeping. Magical!

If you take this profile too seriously then you did in fact judge a book by it's cover...


First date:
I want to stare into your eyes just to see who blinks first! If you win, I'm breaking up with you!


Peace...

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First Date
Let's keep it simple.


// too simple add something crazy. simple is booring..

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Thanks for the tips guys! I really appreciate it! I haven't had time to do any edits yet but I will try and improve it as soon as possible. Keep the advice coming!

let us know about your updates

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