Hello gents,


I'm looking for opinions on my OKC profile, here's the link



http://www.okcupid.com/profile/TylerBeckford



Let me know what y'all think... be as starkly honest as possible, I'm trying to get good at this.


Thanks,


Tye

To much BravoPUa lifted material. Try to do some more original stuff in the same vein.

Change your main profile pix, I cant tell if your the black guy, the chick, or the Jersey shore guy. That pix is ok but not as your main picture.

Get rid of the Star wars thing, not congruent with your profile.

You seem to be fairly consistent with the Good time, Jock, pop your collar, high social status badass guy. I think this is a good profile and a lot of dumb blonde types will go for it. I would just add a couple of unique twists that are consistent with that image and get rid of a few spots which contradict it (again like the star wars thing).

Also, as I tell almost everyone, no: (haha just kidding)

It makes you look wishy-washy and that your tempering unoriginal material as if your not comfortable with it.

What he said ^^

your profile reads like a school boy's rap song

@ aarnold lol what do you mean?