why is POF so hard to F-CLOSE? is my profile noe good enough?
http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=43685080

Profile looks ok. I'm think I would leave out the alpha male comment, and alpha doesn't feel the need to point out that he is. A beta trying to sell himself as an alpha would.

Also:
"message me if you are a stripper, bar tender, waitress, aspiring actress, or if you have implants,sophisticated or just flat out random and spontaneous....but.....if your a zombie.......it will never work."

I'm not sure where you're going with this. The idea is to maximize responses then screen them for compliance. But your goal is to get that first response. After that transition to a number and use some push pull to transition to a meeting. IMO online girls are pretty DTF.

A girl meeting you off the internet is in an emotionally charged state. To her this is a huge risk. What if you aren't who you say you were? What if your photos are from 30 years ago? Just real, fun and sexual will close the deal.

PS - Right now I've got a girl from POF telling me all about how she wants casual sex and sending me naked pics. Literally five minutes ago. This is one of those girls who had looking for a relationship on her profile.

Edit: Your first date section...dude...do you just walk up to every girl you meet and open with "I'm gonna fuck you." Cause thats pretty much what you're doing here. And it's even less solid online than it would be in a club.

I actually really like your profile! (Too bad I'm not a hot chick, eh?)

It's direct and to the point. Try putting in some more pictures of yourself, preferably ones of you being active and adventurous.

Here is the POF description I used to attract my girlfriend today:

[i]Hi, my name’s Adrian. I love mixed martial arts, trying new foods, and meeting pretty girls. I live a very active life and love every minute of it. I dream big and look for people who do the same. I’m aspiring towards a career in the Military. I don’t have too much time to be on here. Let’s be honest, what are the chances of meeting your match online? But enough about me: What are your dreams? Message me if you’re interested in talking! [/i]

The profile is a little too succint, you've ignored the First Date section, which I know is fairly pointless, plus you need to have at least 2 photos of you having fun and/or doing something cool, with male and female friends in them, during the day or at night.