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Ok so i was using a few copy an pasted ones iv saw off here but once it got too messaging it never really went too well.
So i decided to create my own i get a few girls messaging me about it but
no where near as many as i would like

So any tips of whats good in it an whats bad what i can improve to make it a little better also my pictures get a bit off attension but im not sure if its puts them off but i put a part in my profile about why i have them pics there that seem to dhv me a little

cheers guys

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Anybody im pretty low on funds at the moment job issues so i can not really go out that much at night nor day game as i would have no money to instant date an im not too fussed on numbers.

So i mainly want to practice online game because iv always struggled with it an texting i may meet a girl of pof but i highly doubt it unless she was fully willing to pay drive me about an that but i do like to set up dates though maybe a ego boost who knows but if anyone can give me any tips to add that extra edge to my profile then i would greatly appreciate it

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Spelling and grammatical errors. Fix um.

Also, I'm not sure how the other guys feel about this, but personally I try to avoid putting anything in my profile excluding any type of girl.

IE - You have an entire section dedicated to "if you're like this, or this, or this, then don't message me".

The only person who needs to know what disqualifies a person from your potential dating pool is YOU. Nobody likes to feel like they are being judged before you even speak to them.

Instead, focus on YOUR qualities which will attract the right kind of girl to you. Furthermore, rather than TALKING about those qualities specifically, I believe it's best to SHOW you have those qualities.

Are you funny? Make your profile funny.

Are you fun? Make your profile about having fun.

Are you confident? Don't say you are confident, show you are confident by saying things which only confident men would say.

Don't explain yourself... IE - "I know I'm around a lot of girls, etc"

This indicates that other women may have a problem with you being around a lot of girls. Have women messaged you saying that it's suspicious? If they have, then you may want to tone it down a bit. If they haven't, then keep up the good work.

A confident man doesn't need to explain himself...certainly not to any random women over the internet that he hasn't even met yet.

If you want my opinion, keep pictures 3 4 6 and 7, and drop the rest. On picture 7 you may want to add a comment pointing out which person you are, as there are a lot of guys in that photo.

Hope this helps.