what do you think of guys with make up?
girl:blah
me:my instructor said that i have to wear make up while im on stage, becuase this performance is fucking big.
girl:o really ur an actor, model,etc blah blah.
me:no/yes i dance, my intrsutor know miss world canada, so after she win when she come to canada and we'll have performance in her venues.
girl:blah blah,
me: holly fuck( if is text game or not)
replied a bit late,
me: omg we gonna perform for bc lion.

please rate this DHV 1-10 base on the value is giving off ?\
and can this prove social proof? but does it count as preselction tho ?

can this be happen as well ? your stause is high and way too perfect for the girl, that she back off ?

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It's good. If it's true.

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It's not good, comes off as bragging and your poor grammar doesn't help.

oo how do i make it not bragging ?

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oo how do i make it not bragging ?

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It's good. you just need to finetune it. its not like you are bragging, you are just talking about make up. Just give her a little bit and let her ask questions.

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I doubt that this is a good routine. Sounds like bragging to me. You bring up a really good subject, because it's quite controversial still, which gives you the opportunity to seem progressive. I think it's good too think of a good argument (that makes you look intelligent and/or that you have a progressive way of thinking = DHV) before asking this question. When it sounds like you are bragging, some girls could easily think you are some kind of AFC douchebag... That's obviously not what you want!

what can i do to improve

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Just don't use it, I really don't get the whole story because you write like a silly. And read up on how to make DHV stories; they contain different elements like: pre-selection, being alpha, protector of loved ones etc etc.. It's easy, you know what google is.

but this story is true, as well as if u make up she soon find out.

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It sounds playsible, so its better than most stories I have read on this forum. If you can make it sound more spontanious, it might be better. Also you could fit in some questions about her, like if she has experience in theater and stuff. Maybe she played in a schoolmusical once, ask questions about that. If you are able to make you DHV story more of a conversation, it will sound less like bragging

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thnaks man, that is super helpful u no some pep just say, stupid stories but no reason

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