Hello forum

I'm glad to report I've gotten my night game up to speed and I'm starting to see some results.

However, I'm wanting to checkout this online thing too so I decided to try this POF thing to see what its all about.

I must add I am aware I need a group photo of me with my friends on there, I was gonna go one better and upload me with a group of 4 HB's I was with the other night but it didn't come out so good as it was way too blurry (crappy iPhone)

Profile link: http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?pro ... Preview=27

Things I'm not 100% happy with my profile so far:

*Need a decent slogan - That isn't too cheesy (avoiding 50 shades of grey references at all costs)
*Need the group photo uploaded (need a decent one first)
*I know I need to sell myself but I want to show some DHV without DLV myself or coming across as bragging

It's only taken me 5-10 minutes to pull together so any advice and constructive criticism would be appreciated.

Also if you have any other sites to look at (preferably free) I may give those a try too - Just testing the water on this subject really.

I already have a Facebook but I currently just use that for keeping in touch with friends.

Thanks in advance

Hello Hammerofdawn,

To be honest I didn't read your profile, but I saw it and I have an advice that could help. First of all your profile at very begining should emit *pussy aura:) When chicks see your profile their thought should be: this guy is successful with women. 99% of people check the pics if they are ok, if the guy is interesting than they read.

Delete the photo with the guitar and cowboy hat. The photo in a racing car is ok. Women love emotions and adrenaline. Upload pics with better quality, with friends or img with chicks. When they look on your profile they should have a feeling that your life is interesting.
Delete xbox from hobbies. Xbox isn't male or sexy and it won't help you to get laid.

When you complete you profile ask yourself a question:
If I were a chick, would I go to bed with this quy?

*pussy aura- to clarify, aura of women in your life, not aura of being afc

Thanks for your input

I agree I'm just trying to fine tune and trim the fat to get to the good stuff.

---Update---
*I've deleted the guitar pic
*I've removed Xbox from my hobbies

As I said before I'm working on the group photo, I'm at a house party tonight with friends so perhaps that might do until I can get another HB pic.

ok keep up the good work!

Could anybody else spare me some feedback please.

I seem to get people viewing my profile but they never message or message me back, some of which I'd say are HB7-8+ so I can't help but think something still isn't quite right with my profile.

Thanks in advance.

Yes, sth still isn't right, you didn't upload new photos. Check Dorian Grey profile:
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He has quite good pics.

Ooh great find, thank you

***Update***

Added to beginning of profile:

Hello, 25 year old creep reading this with his pants down... My name is Michael

Firstly, I get quite a few messages, so please don't be offended if I don't reply straight away but I do my best to reply to all messages.

Experimenting with this as a instant DHV so will see how I get on - "Fake it until I make it"
Still waiting for my friend to send me the house party photos.



Credit to 'Dorian Grey' and 'Jason Stackhouse' respectively

Dude, my intent wasn't to copy Dorian's style, but to emphasize the good ideas: You show that lot's of girls wrote to you, but If you don't have stylish pics, a bag of money, ferrari, pics from journeys around the world or hordes of hot chicks it won't be reliable. Change the style to not be Dorian's copycat Get good quality photos and than it will be ok.

Your absolutely right, it wasn't my direct intent to just copy and paste, just that opening line did get a genuine giggle out of me so I thought it was well worth adding in.

As with the 2nd line I changed it to make it more congruent to my profile.

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Lets try again:

Hello there, crazy woman with her hand in her pants... at least allow me to get the common pleasantries out the way first before you continue doing what you're doing - My name is Michael

First off, I get quite a few messages, so please don't send me threats like "you're going to drown my pet goldfish" if I don't reply straight away - I do my best to reply to all messages.

*I added a group photo but this isn't the one I wanted to add, so it will have to suffice until I can replace it.*

Don't do a group photo with all HBs. IMHO it is better to have a group photo with a mixed set. Make sure you are in the center/near center of the group. This position projects alpha (i.e. people surround you).

Peace...

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Dude, you don't get what I want to communicate. This photo doesn't show that you have hundred msgs from hot chicks. The photos which you upload should show that you have money, good looks, chicks and exciting life. Than your profile will be succesful.

Thing is a lot of people can't get the line between what photos show, what the profile shows, and what will be displayed in real life (most important). I've seen some ridiculous profiles on here from people trying to be something they're not as was displayed by what it was like before.

Stay true to yourself and add bits of what you see on here. You can fake it online if you're good, but no one's good enough to fake real life.

I do understand where you're coming from and I appreciate your feedback

*cue the massive DLV spike*
I've got to admit I'm not the most photogenic person ever and I'm conscious of photo being taken, the brutal truth is, in reality, I don't have loads of money, I'm average looking and I'm only just starting to find my feet in night game.

I have holiday photos which kind of demonstrate value and I like to travel but I'm with the family, so there are a lot of images I rather not upload to protect their identity so a lot of my photos tend to be just me on my own.

I thought about blurring their faces but I decided against it, as it obviously shows the image has been edited.
The all HB picture is even worse quality of these two combined and it is not worth uploading.

Come to think of it and flicking through my phone, I do have pictures of me with a mixed set, I've attached links to those pictures below, but I am not happy with the quality of the images, its too dark, the flash was an issue and they are a little blurry (may have been the dry ice in the club).

(For clarity I'm the guy in the white shirt)

What I do like about the first one is I am the centre of the photo but I'm behind everyone instead of in front.

http://i196.photobucket.com/albums/aa23 ... 7974_n.jpg

This one isn't so good, but if you notice the women do surround me but I'm not focus point of this photo - although my target was the one taking the photo.

http://i196.photobucket.com/albums/aa23 ... 5920_n.jpg

(If these are worth editing properly (eyes mainly) I'll be able to fix that).

You cant really change your looks, so fucking smile like a BOSS and look at the camera with "I'm gonna wear your ass out when we meet" eyes! It will do wonders.


Peace...

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All girl's are Freaks...It is your job to bring it out in them! - Crypto

You need to stop bending over and letting her ass fuck your brain! - Heywood