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PostPosted: Thu Jun 14, 2012 2:23 am 
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So I decided to get back to online dating, I just finished writing up my profile!

http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=24135081

any criticism welcome!


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PostPosted: Thu Jun 14, 2012 2:44 am 
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get rid of the checkered shirt leaning pictures and the guitar case stairway picture, they add nothing to the other 3 better pictures.

Add some qualification to your profile, you need to appear as if you are being picky with who you would date.

your ideal date part is too supplicating, make it adventurous and funny, dont make it reactive to the womans behest.


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PostPosted: Thu Jun 14, 2012 3:19 am 
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cheers man, thanks. I fixed it a bit. Is it too cheesy now?


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PostPosted: Thu Jun 14, 2012 5:23 am 
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its better but add some more pictures cool pix, maybe an athletic one in o the mix


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PostPosted: Thu Jun 14, 2012 12:26 pm 
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Need to check your spelling "of" not "off" near the end of your about me. Additionally, I would add a picture with you and some friends at a party/beach/game, etc! Make sure to position yourself in or near the middle of the group in the picture as well.

Lose the "if it is safe" IMO...Comes across as kinda Beta to me

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 14, 2012 4:51 pm 
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I have one of me in the midde of the group, but I had just woke up from a nap and I look fucking hideous lol.

I added an athletic picture instead, what do you think?

Also I removed the Beta parts and fixed off. Thanks!


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