I lose hotties by either:

talking too much,
saying too much,
being too forward,
being too direct,
saying the wrong things at the wrong times,
going overboard, etc.

This is one example, (there are many more examples like this...)

I had a date set for tonight with an HB8.5. We met last week, texted several times traded pics, etc.,..texted her today, this is what went down:

Me: "Good morning gorgeous! I will be in (her city) tonight, perhaps we can meet for a drink later? Have a great day!"

HB8.5: "Sure! Sounds fun

Me: "______ Lounge around 8:00?"

HB8.5: "Sure. where is that?"

Me: *Gives address*

HB8.5: "Got it"

Me: "Wear something tight "

HB8.5: "Really?"

Me: "Sorry, at work. Yes really. we may go for a ride....I don't want your dress blowing away in the wind. At least, not on out first date "

HB8.5: *no reply*

Me (2 hours later): "...On my bike...a ride on my bike. Unless you are scared of motorcycles..."

HB8.5: *no reply*

So it looks like I blew another opportunity with a hot babe, by jibber-jabbering away. Had a date set up and everything. What the Fuck is wrong with me? I was trying to generate intrigue, excitement, sexual tension...and it backfired.

Help!

I know I need to STFU, but it's difficult to determine when and what to say...

Me: "Sorry"

Help!

I know I need to STFU, but it's difficult to determine when and what to say...[/quote]

That's where you lost traction Bro!....MEEeeeoooowww LOL! just some kidding to go
along with it!

Should of went with: Of course, really!

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They call me the cat whisperer, cause I know exactly what the pussy needs.

I said "Sorry, at work..." because it was 30 minutes between her message and that reply.

SHE JUST TEXTED:

HB8.5: "I'm not scared, but it might not be so fun in rain."

I digress! GOOD JOB! holding tight was the way to go Bro, I was just sayin, don't ever apologize! the rest was solid!

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They call me the cat whisperer, cause I know exactly what the pussy needs.

your text seems fine thus far, even if you lost her sometimes chicks wont comply or have logistical issues. Don't second guess yourself based on any single girls reaction, adjust your game based on a data set clearly showing a problem.