I've been trying this on POF this week. It's something that does involve at least glancing through their profile, so you can change out adjectives as needed.

But with an admittedly small sample size (5) I've gotten good results.

100% response rate.
100% number-close after a handful of messages and a fake time-constraint, telling her to keep messaging me or to text me.
2 of them admitted to having not even read my profile until after we'd been texting.
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Here it is:



"Your profile is sooo full of contradiction.

Normal. Adventrous, crazy (sense of humor).
Goofy. Serious.
Love the sun. Love night.
Crazy. Shy, quiet. Excited, energetic.

It sounds like you miiiiighttt be suffering from a case of slight multiple personality disorder.

But both of you sound very nice "



I feel like basically everything here is really easy to find in most girls' profiles. It's just a handful of generic words, really.

You can tailor it to her specifically if you want. It's shorter than what I'd been using before, and a lot less effort. But it still doesn't seem like something generic.

Any thoughts? Suggestions for improvements?

Strong personalities will write you off from the start with this, they will percieve it as criticizm and they can find plenty of "You are drop dead gorgeous" messages to boost their ego!

The rest of the HB will probably be inclined to defend themselves. I will start testing this starting tuesday! Feedback forthcoming...

Peace...

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I think its pretty good but your gonna have to add some content and padding to encase it. The basic push/pull mechanism you have is well done.