hey, im still new to this, tell me where i went wrong or any hints/advice

I was walking with a mate up a shopping street talking about businesses after dinner and as i walked pass this group of chicks, the one that had her back towards the walk path just happened to inhale her ciggarette and then relax her arm - only to burn my hand in the process.

oh boy it burnt, i tried to be a man by just looking at it and brushing off the embers still glowing on my hand. her friends saw that and told her, she turned around and freaked out. She started getting hysterical

"omg! did i fucking burn you?! im so sorry...im so sorry...SORRY.."

so i turned around to reply, "yeah you did burn me honey," looking at my hand again as if it's damaged goods then looked at her "are you gonna make it up to me for it?"

she is still shocked that she burnt me with her cigg, and her friends were just watching in silence, i kept eye contact with her trying to charm her and show my sexy/seductive side....so i really didnt check out her friends. she then askes in a confused way "how....would i make it up to you?"

ME: "you seeing anyone at the moment?"
HB7: "um...im kinda dating someone"
ME: "well, i'll give you my number, and when you decide this dude you're 'kinda dating' (i emphasised that hes not worth it) is not impressive enough, give me a buzz alright? but of course, by all means, if hes a decent bloke, stay with him" - although i sounded like AFC, i thought, well, if shes not gonna budge...at least she might pass my number onto one of her friends
HB7: "umm...."
ME: "babe, you're not gonna burn me again are you? first it was with your ciggarette butt and now its gonna be a rejection of merely accepting my number" - by now, one of her friends kinda murmured a "take it" so, if the girl i wanted wasnt interested, at least another friend was.
HB7: "yeah alright" with a big smile. I walked towards her putting my left arm around her back. - just for immediate kino
Me: "so....you've got a phone right?" - she then takes out her phone, and i take it off her to type in my number with my right hand. I ring myself and when i heard my phone ring i faced her about 3-4inches from her face "cool, do call me. my name's is ... William by the way, whats yours?
Hb7: "Melanie"
ME: Ah, it was such a burning sensation to meet you
<laughs> - i tried to kiss her on the mouth but she backed away.


she smiles and before i leave, i directed her to give me a kiss on my left cheek before letting go of her, walking away and making a hand gesture to call me before winking and turning my back on her.
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After about 30mins, i get a call...and im a sucker for this, but i kept talking to her as well while she yapped on and on while i was on the train home. we talked and talked, and agreed to meet up the next day. this happened at about 9pm

*** Just before i went to sleep around 11pm, i got another call. This time, it was a cute voice and its another friend, i think it may have been the blonde, the hb6 i think was the one who urged her friend to get my number. I asked her about going behind her friend's back, and she responded "well, since Melanie is kinda dating that other guy, and kinda dating you..." she basically justified it by saying it was ok unless one of them told the other to back off

so i went on the date with melanie, pashed her when i first saw her, arm around her and full of smiles. had lunch, went dutch, went to the park, more kisses. (i've never had so much kino in my life without fear of getting a slap on the face when i was AFC)

it was getting hot and sweaty, uncomfortably as it was a humid day. I asked if she lived nearby, and asked if i could use her shower so i didnt pass my BO onto her, and have her reminding me about another man. she laughed, and took me to her place. initially, she thought her parents were at home - but luckily they werent. I had my shower, came out with the towel around my waist looking seductively at her as she sat on her bed then went to kiss her again. this time, i stretched it, my fingers on her neck, holding her in my arms....by now junior was uncomfortably straped down by the towel.

i stopped, looked at her confused and said "you dont know what you're doing do you?"
Mel: "what do you mean?"..still wanting to resume our kissing
ME: kissing doesnt just involve lips and tongues honey, use your hands too

i resumed kissing, rubbing her back, then slipped my hand under her shirt and around her ribs, then up to groupe her tits. FINALLY, it clicked in her head. she took off my towel.

Because i hadnt wanked and been horny for the last 5mins, i knew i would blow my load in less than 5minutes. so i had to turn her on with forplay and give her a headstart. I stripped her off, kissed her down to her knees then back up towards her pussy

- then it hit me. IT STUNK LIKE A ROTTING SQUID. the closest i was to it was about 10cm. but not being a jerk or freaking out that she was diseased (and not wanting to abort a free root), i just continued kissing upwards towards her mouth again to avoid it and hope. condom on, then i went in...a bit too easily. After a while, when i was nearly going to blow, i could smell something worse, her BO was stronger than mine! I had to rush it, lay on her for a bit...then hit the showers again. i didnt even wanna touch the condom as it stunk as well.

i made up some excuse about forgetting to get groceries and left. i havnt been returning any of her sms or calls.
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Next girl i went out with. I didnt even save her name down or her number. We met, i tried kissing but she pushed me off, i asked for her name about 4times during the day -i still forgot to save her number and forgot her name. she wasnt as hot, but she was just so dumb it annoyed the shit outta me. i tried heaps of kino, then she tried the ASD and LMR to full kisses. she then went on about how god wouldnt look too kindly upon her and all that bullshit. After the date, i only get a peck on the cheek and a hug. it was shit. she also said she's gonna save it for marriage etc etc.

Thats my story, guys help me out. What can the 1st girl do to get rid of the smell(S). The 2nd girl, how the hell do i crack into a religious anti-kiss/sex freak?

also, if you can think of anything better to do with my actions, anything better to say etc - please leave it in detail. i gotta perfect this art! i have to aim higher.

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First off I'm sorry to hear about the first girls BO, that really stinks! LOL. Alright seriously, it's going to take more comfort building to be able to talk to her about her BO without pissing her off. The second one sounds like a church freak and might be hard to get past.

I say, you had your fun, move on to some others!

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Do her under the shower once again and then move on

jhaha, of course im definately moving on.

i was just wondering, through what ive typed up, if there's anything i could have done to improve my game, make them more compliant, any situational kino (its still a little awkward just touching them without a reason), any smart remarks or places to go etc.

the church one? yeah, shes definately off my list, i invited her to a satanic gathering with my mates, and never heard back from her again.

anyway, when a girl stinks down there - is that a disease? is it normal? is it just a combination of accumulated sweat that wasnt washed off properly?

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Yeah it's called stinky crotch disease, now your dick will fall off. No seriously, depends on the smell. If a girl doesn't wash properly or often enough it will stink.. on the other hand diseases can cause it to stink worse IMHO and from reading general stuff about STDs. Either way good deal wearing a condom.. ALWAYS wear a condom, no matter how tempting the situation.

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"If it smells like trout, eat it out! If it smells like cologne, leave it alone" haha no don't follow that.. but it's what my friend's dad used to tell us when we were little haha

I think you did fine. But from a strict PUA perspective, I think you may have telegraphed too much interest. You were the one 'begging' for the number and name and such at the beginning. Ideally, the converse happens.

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