Just LOOKING for friends right now.

Not fond of the London club scene, tired of being asked if I have any blow.
I guess I’m looking to see if there are any girls who break the London mould.

Work in the film industry, which is pretty amazing, crazy how life works out, guess the ‘Secret’ works.

Do not message me if you are a:
Stripper
Bartender
Waitress
Aspiring actress
Scorpio
Or if you have implants

It never woks out….

Intelligence > Looks - Period. I don't care how hot you think you are, if your brain is in sizeable comparison to a peanut we are not going to get along. To hit my point home allow me to provide you with an example: If you talk lik dis with bad typing then I'm going to comprehend you as an imbecile. Furthermore if all you have going is a pretty face with a complete lack of drive and ambition towards succeeding in life I'm not going to think you're an imbecile, but simply lost. I'm only interested in meeting uplifting "happy" people, people who are taking their lives in the direction of passion.

I'm looking for an honest, independent and charismatic woman to be able to relax with and cuddle in bed.

I'm NOT looking to date. First you have to prove we can get along as friends before taking things to that level.

Star signs mean something to me, I'm a leo are you compatible with me?

So if you've come this far and you think we would get along send me a message, I don't bite.. Actually that's not true

Please DON'T send me boring messages like: "sexy", I will NOT reply.

A guy on POF in my area has a profile that is virtually identical to what you just posted. The list is in the same order and all. When I saw his I knew he copied it off a site like this. So you surely did the same.

Give it more of your own personality man. Your gonna shine through in the end anyway.

Can you be more specific, what does and doesn't work?

I don't want to add too much about me as I want to entice the woman to talk to me.

Not to sell myself.

TC

Just LOOKING for friends right now.
Why would you want to exclude your self from all the women that want to be more than friends, A lot of women don't want friends, they have plenty and your on a dating site...

Not fond of the London club scene, tired of being asked if I have any blow.
I guess I’m looking to see if there are any girls who break the London mould.

This brings the mood down, its Negative and show's nothing but the possibility that you look like or act like a drug dealer.

Work in the film industry, which is pretty amazing, crazy how life works out, guess the ‘Secret’ works.

Great line, makes people want to know what "Secret" , and if they know what your talking about then it also sounds like you have a great story waiting to be told.

Do not mesage me if you are a:
Stripper
Bartender
Waitress
Aspiring actress
Scorpio
Or if you have implants

It never woks out….

Again this is all Negative, draws the question... why ? what do bartenders, waitress, actress, strippers have in common, usually they are beautiful and confident women who get what they want based on their looks.

The next question, Why doesn't it work out for you, how many times have you tried and failed.. what's wrong with this guy...

Intelligence > Looks - Period. I don't care how hot you think you are, if your brain is in sizeable comparison to a peanut we are not going to get along. To hit my point home allow me to provide you with an example: If you talk lik dis with bad typing then I'm going to comprehend you as an imbecile. Furthermore if all you have going is a pretty face with a complete lack of drive and ambition towards succeeding in life I'm not going to think you're an imbecile, but simply lost. I'm only interested in meeting uplifting "happy" people, people who are taking their lives in the direction of passion.

This statement above just remove and replaced it with what I have below, still needs work but the negativity is gone, You don't need to explain your self, ever...

I'm looking for an honest, independent and charismatic woman to be able to relax with and cuddle in bed. Intelligence is just as important as looks so don't be fooled but I'm only interested in meeting uplifting, happy, interesting people who are taking their lives in a direction of passion, I only want to surround my self with those who are just as motivated and ambitious as I am

I'm NOT looking to date. First you have to prove we can get along as friends before taking things to that level.

This is called a frist date... and why limite your self to "friends" your not going to hold your friends hand, your not going to kiss your friend, so if you ask a girl out as a friend then try to put the moves on her ... well that's kinda pointless, and if you start out as friends and get to know each other well enough.. when you do try something you might end up with the.. I like you just as a friend.. and you don't ever wanna hear that line.

Star signs mean something to me, I'm a leo are you compatible with me?

Really ? that's something that you can share over coffee, but she's not going to read this and think wow I gotta talk to this guy about star signs... and a star sign would really keep you from meeting someone ?

So if you've come this far and you think we would get along send me a message, I don't bite.. Actually that's not true Wink

You don't want her to think about if your interesting... if she has to think then your doing it wrong... by the time she has finished seeing your photos and reading your message and then reading your profile and gets to the bottom she finds you already interesting.. so you need to find something else to finish up your profile.

Please DON'T send me boring messages like: "sexy", I will NOT reply.
again.. kinda negative.. and to me having a girl send me a message even saying Hi sexy.. and that's her first message.. that's not boring to me if shes a 7-10... ill make that work.

I don't mean to be rude mate but I would scrap that whole thing and start again. It's way too negative throughout and presents too many hurdles and requirements before you even begin an interaction with the girl.

Plus "just looking for friends right now" is a chick thing to say.

Don't make a list of demands or a general list of things you don't like about girls. Sure you can make demands but do it in a fun way though.

Serious, start again and write the thing with a smile on your face.

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Ok what about this

PS. the whole just looking for friends I won't sleep with you on the first date works quite well. I've had a couple of messages from girls saying its so refreshing and different to what guys usually write.

But I've tried to make it more uplifting:


LOOKING FOR FRIENDS FIRST IF ANYTHING.

I am a busy individual and I have no time to meet women the traditional way due to my work. I'm looking to see if there are any girls who break the London mould. NOT looking to date. First you have to prove we can get along as friends before taking things to that level. Friends first always.

I am toes in sand, breeze on skin, and squirt gun behind you

ABOUT ME:
I like to cause trouble, not the serious kind of trouble so much; more like getting a rise out of somebody. “Hi Julie... Wow, that shirt is nice” [Cheshire smile and walk away]

I'm smart, athletic, particular and ambitious. I'm judgmental, though I strongly believe in and respect personal freedom. My harshest critic is either myself or, possibly, my mother. I'm very close with my family and value that aspect of my life highly. I work in the film industry which I love and I consider myself such a lucky guy to be doing what I'm doing.

On our first date, I will not have sex with you. It's a shame how forward most girls are these days and the complete lack of self-respect they have for themselves. First comes a real connection then sex comes afterwards. If you're just looking to hook up, I'm not interested.

Why do people have such a problem with admitting their sources? This profile is taken from Bravo's Crack The Code To Online Game video on youtube. He makes a pretty convincing case for why and how it works. I agree it looks samey and generic but the basic points of it are that you are stating you are a prize to be won.