I just make new profile. no matter how good it is, there always room for improvement. would love to hear advice from everyone.


I'm single, but i'm not really looking either. Many things are going on in my life right now, but I'm enjoy it. I love being quiet, drinking hot coffee, read QG magazine, watching movie, and keep everything clean. I also enjoy cruise my motorcycle as posted speed, keep everybody safe, enjoy the breeze of freedom, being a good US citizen........and suddenly I just rev up my bike in higher gear, smoke that douche bag in his Camaro and feel the adrenaline rush running in my spine.
That pretty much give u guy an idea of who i am. I'm kind of unpredictable, always quiet, but will say things and do things that people remember forever. I was born and grow up from a different country, so I'm embrace my heritage, but able to live in America make me want to step out of my comfort zone and interact with other culture. I like to go out, do things that people talk for year, obtain endless good memory with friend. Drive sport car, motorcycle, party at the club, go to different event, road trips, meet new people are few of many things that i love to do. We only have one life to remember after all, i want to fill it with difference experience and good memory. That my goal for now.
I like variety and try new things, but I still want that only woman who always by my side. wake up next to me, sit next to me in my car or at the dinner table. That one girl is probably is one of the hardest things to find.
I love beautiful woman, they always get my attention. A sexy girl will make my jaw drop. but beautiful and sexy curve is all she got. i will slap my face and move on. but if she is extremely hot, i will slap my face twice and move on. if you can't take care yourself or organize your life, don't even bother message me ( unless you want me to mentor you, but the cost is high and you still have to be hot).
Character, intelligence is really important to me, because i want to learn new things from you also. I love to take care of people and my girl, but not baby sit you (it's more fun to baby sit little kid than you anyway) I'm a reasonable man, I will treat you the way you deserve. I will bring ice cream to you when u sad, but you being ridiculous to me, i will eat it with my little cousin
1st day
YES! I LOVE SEX. but i won't have sex on first day, unless.......
First date's all about spontaneous, so i cannot tell you yet. May be chasing after you on the beach at the dawn, or share that milk shake.. I love to spend time with love one and cooking to cool down, i would love to cook for you too. if u are not what i expected. I just put wasabi in your food to turn you down( lol hell no i ever do that)

I'm here on this website to meet new people, so if you are hot, intelligence or think you have a shot, send a message to me. I don't really care who you are. it's all about good memory and good time.


and I'm currently using Darth Vader opener.
u also can find me on pof as DiscoveryThomas

Okay wow so this if your first paragraph. Where to start. So your opening catch their attention line is "I'm single, but I'm not really looking either." Okay well that's bullshit cause you're on a dating site so scrap this line please.

Then you go into your laundry list as I call it of what you are interested in. Alright this isn't terrible but almost every guys profile does this. Take it from someone who's done a good bit of research into this that your profile will blend in written as it is thus far...minus the thing about smoking the guy in the Camaro.

BTW, don't use "douche bag" or cussing typically in any profile you write, and try to use proper spelling and grammar please!
Wow I barely made it through that and I'm committed to helping people on this forum. I can't imagine a hot chick is going to read that much. You really are going to have to shorten this thing down. I understand English is a second language for you so have someone proof what you write before you publish it please.
WTF? Let me say that again... WTF?!? I don't even know what to say about this but delete it. Generally speaking We all love beautiful women but you can drop the slapping your face stuff it really isn't doing anything for me or anyone else reading it.
No girl is going to believe this cause you just spent a whole paragraph talking about how looks are so important to you.
Oh boy.... I don't have a problem stating in profiles that you aren't going to sleep with them on the first encounter. Personally it's more of a false disqualification than anything else to make me look better...but you don't need this much on it. That and I'd shortern your first date response too...

And the whole wasabi thing is a bit creepy!!!
Alright man, so long and short of all this is you have some really really creepy stuff in your profile. You start off saying you're single but not looking. BUT you're on a dating site. Please come up with something that is going to catch their attention.

You need this to be short like maybe two paragraphs at the most three. and by paragraphs I mean like 4 sentences long each.

Really be cautious about talking about sex, slapping, or anything else in your profile except to say you're not interested in a casual encounter or you that you won't be sleeping with anyone on the first date. It's a false disqualifier you two get into bed that's your business but don't list your exceptions to the rule on the site.

You also need to work to be more witty and convey your personality more. All I get from this as its written is you are a guy that has a hard time spelling, punctuating, are after sex with hot girls, and is a total creeper.

Be sure to have a catchy headline as well. You didn't list it here but Headlines make a huge difference!!!

Highly recommend watching Bravo PUA's tips on POF...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=65fRrFJnrBg

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