Hey, what's up names Stephen i'm german irish and czech you can tell by my big noggin lol. I just got out of active duty as a combat engineer (demolition) I switched my job recently to finance/accounting and i'm going to CW post for accounting. I like a lot of things ranging from dancing, cracking jokes all day, wine, cooking and having fun. You know it sucks when people don't talk and be all stand offish lifes about having fun and doing all you can before its to late. I want to try to get out to the city more and explore. I go to the gym often i'm in good shape. I eat very healthy. I don't drink much and I don't smoke. I'm down to go to the bars/clubs it'ss pretty funny seeing your friends being all drunk and dumb.



What are some improvements I should make for this profile....Thanks in advance

Okay so you start out with your name, a little about your heritage, and a crack at your physical appearance as a Demonstration of Lower Value...not the best start. Then you go into talking about your work, and from there a laundry list of what you enjoy doing.

Never do you really describe what you are like. I know what you're interested in but have no concept of your personality through this. I also have no concept of the type of girl you want to meet through this which should be given a few sentences to at the very least.

Dude, I'd scrap the whole thing and go with something else. I highly recommend checking out this video and following it to the T. I've had good luck with this method on POF.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=65fRrFJnrBg

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