Hey guys.

Brand new to the forums and just wanted to get some input on my POF profile. I've tried using some of the openers without much success so I figured it may be useful to examine how I could spruce up my profile. Any input would be greatly appreciated.

Username is: Marquettefan8810

Hey there,

I checked out your profile and I'd say it's pretty solid. However you could make a few tweeks. First off, rather than say you are looking for a relationship, state you are just seeking a hang out or something. Telegraphing that you want a relationship can be interpreted as needy. Obviously you aren't but some women will see it that way.

You could also cut down your description a little, remember you're dealing with a short attention span online.

Not sure what your opening emails have been like, can you give me some examples?

If you need more help / advice let me know.

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Good luck bud!

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I've been using some openers I've found here in the forums such as, "Hey, I would delete that photo from your profile" or " I am pretty sure there is more to you than a pretty face, but, I can't just figure out what it is and, beauty is everywhere, so tell me about you, let's see if we click. " Also been using "The Mirror Opener". I have messaged about 25-30 girls with two responses and one was a real bitch about it. I have thought about going with direct openers but lack the creativity to form one.

If you're asking me if I need more help the answer is "hell to the yes."

Just redid my profile after watching Bravo's video.

Should I shorten if further?

Curious. Are these working?

Those openers? I didnt have any luck. After redoing my profile to Bravo's specs I have had some success, so far at least. I started using the opener "Are you one of those girls who takes FOREVER to do their hair and makeup or does it just look that way naturally?" with the subject: "Serious Question..."

Got 4 responses so far. Sent messages back for two of them. It is almost 3am here so we will see what happens later today.

I was curious about that profile. If it really worked. Please keep the thread updated with your findings.

Oh.. I saw another guy in here was using it as well... Probably a lot of people are.

Firstly dont worry about the 'bitches'. Some woman just respond badly to stuff and aren't worth the time. Just one other quick point...are those 20-30 emails your sending actually getting opened/read? Hot girls get hundreds of emails a day (I'm not kidding) so dont be surprised if your ass gets deleted before seeing the light of day.

BTW if you want me to design a profile for you let me know.

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I've been testing out Bravo's profile specs and have had some good success with it. I havent had girls messaging me like he claims to have constantly. If you see any way my profile could be improved by all means let me know.