ok so heres the story was out last night in a club ended up k closing this hb 8 then proceeded to number close her aswel spent most of the night k closing her and dancing with her. This morning started texting her and everything is going well she seems intrested and im ment to be calling her tonight now i dunno wether to ask her out on the phone tonight or in a text tomorrow i was thinkin of asking her out like this " hey monday night was fun:) im going out for a drink on thursday was wondering if u wanted to come along nothing to serious well just have some fun and see what happens "

anything im doing wrong here or should change? any help is appreciated guys!

Looks good to me bro, go with your instinct on this one.

Do what I quoted, call her tonight as late as shes up (9pm-11pm is best) and tell her "Thurday is bar night, why don't you come? (she says sure or I'm busy, if she says yes say) if you're gunna show up you'll have bring your fun" (if she says I'm busy DONT ask her why shes busy just say) "dam to bad, I'll go with my other friends"
like jsmooth says your pretty good on your own but those are my pointers

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