Hey guys,
I'm looking for some feedback on my online profile. I've started with OKCupid, but I'm finding very low response rates. I notice that most of these girls are labeled as "responds very selectively", but regardless I want to make this better. So, here is a link to my profile and a copy of the standard message that I send out. Tear it apart.


Profile:
www.okcupid.com/profile/anthonymike

Message:
Hey,

...1-2 sentences of small talk on something relating to her profile... Anyways, Cupid put you on the list, and I thought you seemed interesting, so I wanted to say Hi and see if you are someone I should get to know.

Three random things about moi:
My favorite trip was to Venice.
I'm a huge hockey fan.
I love upbeat people.

Cupid says we're XX% enemies. I don't know what that means, but in Texas XX% chance of rain means there's no way it's going to rain. So tell me, where do you want life to take you? and where has it taken you so far?

--Anthony



** note that pieces may have been influenced by other posts/profiles and props to anyone that has helped

your profile is actually pretty good, clear picture, I don't see anything wrong with what you wrote either. Online girls are mostly on here for ego boost. Most really wont date unless it's like their ideal dream guy.

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