So this is my profile and I recently made it with inspiration from others, forum posts and some research. I read in the game that the way to do this was to be super cocky and a perfect gentleman in person. So far I haven't gotten many results. Tips, ideas, hints?

http://www.plentyoffish.com/viewprofile ... d=30185368

Thanks so much

Not sure how to comment on your page, havn't really tried online game myself.

But have looked at Niel Strauss's myspace page. His 'About Me' sums up his the super cocky add you are looking for.


http://www.myspace.com/neilstrauss

Looks like you'd probably get responses from women with cocked eyebrows, wondering whether you really are all you crack yourself up to be. As long as you can follow through in person, looks good. She might think you either have a sense of humor, pose an interesting challenge, or are full of shit.

But, if you're going to brag about perfect spelling, better change "woman" to "women" in #4.

That's the best profile I've seen on here. Something is telling me someone's showing off. :p


Edit: I'm so stealing number 6. Sorry, we do live in different areas, and that's what ya get for being a show off! :p

Thank you very much for the correction and please feel free to take #6 since I borrowed it from somewhere else too.

I think this is one of those things where we all agree it to be good because of our traditional guy way of thinking but girls really haven't been following through at all, so far at least. I could back it up in person but I don't know what's stopping these girls from approaching and messaging me. I thought that was the whole point of having a good profile. I don't know what else I could be lacking...

I've dated lots of girls off pof and use each one for insight. They do not usually seek out and contact guys. It could be your approach to online.

Use the princess opener, and send it out to a few.

Good luck!

it seems almost too cocky. Like, there are bits of funny interspersed here and there, a lot of it is just plain arrogance.

then again, I don't get many replies on dating websites either. I'm interested to know how profile like this does, I hope you'll keep us updated.

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As someone who spent way too much time online in the last 2 months (gotta admit its fun and addictive) I can tell you 2 things:

1. I would bet your profile is one of the best in your area.

2. The hot girls will almost never email you.

Its my belief that online dating is a real Turkey shoot for quality women. Think about what is a hb8+ doing single and on a computer? Online is a woman's playground anyway. Its the perfect vehicle for them to be as shallow as they want in private. One other thing is they go on there with "dream guy" expectations and get hundreds of emails a week. Therefore they are always in filter mode ready to find one thing wrong with you and keep looking for Brad Pitt.

Why shouldn't they be looking for perfection? If they want real guys all they gotta do is leave their house. Don't forget the married and bored women or the real made up hot silicon valley type girls that are on there are just looking for a fuck outside their rich boyfriend who no longer does it for them. My buddy is a body builder type and we proved this by targeting them, writing out dumb messages and slapping some ABS pics on there. Pretty funny but I digress.

I'm being overly negative to illustrate the uphill in the snow both ways battle that online can be. Honestly I'm being very experimental with it and will continue for about a month until school starts since I'm in a new city and don't know anybody. After that ill have no need.

Until then, if you want I can PM you a list of openers and we can share results and learn about what works. Online wing if you will lol. REMEMBER OPENING THEM FIRST IS A NATURAL DLV! It has to be done though. I can also tell you about 2 profile setups that work the best. Happy hunting!

What's the princess opener? I may be sounding cocky (go figure) but I believe I don't send out boring messages but seldom get a response. And with no responses I can't really learn what I'm doing wrong. In fact the only girls I'm still speaking to on this site are ones who messaged me (only 2 no excitement there).

Is there a general flow to these things?

Warrior, I'm starting to realize what you're saying. There always a few gems who might work a few jobs or live far away and don't have much time so socialize. I'm all for the on-line winging please PM that info and I could show you how I attempted to open them even though it wasn't always super effective.

best

FUCKING LOVE #4!!

Anyway, on any dating site. I don't use POF, but I use OkCupid, and usually girls wont message you first. Very rarely. Usually, the girls to message me are ugly and/or handicapped.

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My constructive critcism:

Your profile is pretending to be cocky. But it's still completely framed like all other guy's profiles.

You're not actually being cocky at all. You're being extremely funny and amusing, which if anything demonstrates that you're trying even harder than most guys. Or perhaps you are wittier by nature, but you are still being qualified.

You need to be the one qualifying.

Also your phrasing is very male-style. I enjoyed it, but chicks won't have the patience to read that much build up.

Thank you for the tips Soul fighter, I've also found it to be true. The messaging is really what its about. I met the exception to the rule, gorgeous girl messaged me recently, I was skeptical the whole time. A few messages back and forth, a phone call and then a meet up. A few days later I closed the deal, she was phenomenal in every way. I'm still talking to her and trying figure out the psychology of why such a beautiful girl would seek me out and not respond to the dozens of messages in her inbox. She said "I like that you wrote a lot". It's not much for now but I'll keep you guys posted

GreenorgyKing, thank you for this. You're able to pinpoint exactly what I feared about my profile. Very astute and insightful of you. It is shaped in a very male-style manner I suppose because that's what I would find amusing. Now that the main problems have been identified what do you suppose the remedy is?