Hey, guys! Just finished my first online dating profile, and wanted to get your opinion. Any thoughts you have are much appreciated. A few things I was wondering about, though:

Does that self-summary drag on too long?
Does the 'I'm really good at' innuendo come across, or is it too blah?
Do I exhibit the right amount of 'qualifying' speech in my 'message me if' section?

Thanks, guys!

http://www.okcupid.com/profile/IAmFreshPrince

Link?

Yeah, sorry. Was trying to figure out how to do it some other way, but here it is.

You don't have any information about yourself at all. It's just a bunch of empty sentences. Pictures are good, information is not.

Cool, thanks. I'm tying to not run the risk of giving too much away about myself. I'm new to online gaming, and am finding it much harder to figure out what can and cannot be revealed online to properly introduce yourself, but leave mystery and intrigue.

Qeustion: Which is bigger, the Sun or the Earth?
Your answer: "The Earth."

really, dude? REALLY??



From reading your questions and answers, you're a very socially conservative christian who is OK with waiting for sex before marriage.
If that's true, I suggest you be more up-front in your profile about it, and say that you only want good Christian girls to message you - basically say something about it that will make a girl qualify herself to you (and you don't want girls who aren't christians to message you, so you're also avoiding wasting everyone's time).
If it's not true, I'd take a second look at your Q and As and change some of them so you don't give people the wrong impression.

Ok. Cool, thanks, man. I'm trying to answer questions so that it doesn't come across as desperate. I guess I overshot and am coming across as a monk. Any questions in particular stick out?

Sounds fun... maybe avoid 'best night of your life' which implies 1NS, but who doesn't right. Maybe try letting a lady friend read it and give her honest opinion. Have at least 2 'just friends' kind of girls around too for these kind of things...and to get out of dates that aren't going anywhere.