http://www.plentyoffish.com/viewprofile ... d=28071819

POF Profile

http://www.okcupid.com/profile/sonic172

OKCupid Profile

I'm going in on both with some humour, try and show a little seriousness with what I'm about as well with a bit of cockiness but I'm having very little results, what am I doing wrong?

Your second picture should be the default on OKC.

Overall, I think you need to add a bit more complexity and a touch of sarcasm to your humor. As I was reading through your profile, I couldn't help but ask "where did that come from?" on at least a few occasions. It seems randomly placed and way too deliberate for anyone to understand. One thing that tends to help is to read the OKC forums and see what other guys are putting in their profiles, and use that to work off of. Just make sure you don't pick out material from losers.

On a completely unrelated note, props for that music list. Damn nice list of bands there.

Thanks, switched the default pic, changed some of the text as well to try and make it a little more continuos

I just looked at okcupid, not a fan of plenty of fatties. But IMO its kinda long, I personally would trim it down.