Hey guys,

So, I've recently gotten back to the online game. I've been talking to a few girls on there, but my response rate isn't as great as I had hoped. Just wondering if it might be something about my profile and if you guys have any suggestions/criticisms of what I can improve:

http://www.okcupid.com/profile/DigitalAsh58

I feel I have powerful whit and a strong sense of humor. I wanted to get that across in my profile. I wonder if I went too far though. Let me know what you think.

Bump! Situation's still the same. Would love some input. Not sure if it's my profile or my game

IDK, to me your profile looks okay. Good grammar, kinda c/f, but still gets the point across about who you are, what you like to do, and the type of guy you are.

If you put on a suit, and shave, you'll probably get a lot more responses. More often than not, women prefer clean-cut men. If you wanna role like you are online, you'll need to go after a certain type of woman.

I'm kinda the same type as you.. A Network Engineer and I snowboard a lot. I don't shave, and wear casual clothes in my pics too. I just don't care. If chicks don't message me because of that, fuck 'em.

I'd axe the hookah line.


Really, when I first saw you're profile, I thought you were just trolling. I've seen a lot worse in here...

Nope, the post is 100% legit! I've been out of the online game for more than a year now and I'm pretty rusty. Thanks for the tips.

One question, is it better to toss a few messages and go for the number or try and get them on chat first? That said, IM her or message her first?

I'm going to agree with what's been said: The profile looks great. It doesn't seem over the top to me, so any girl who does think so probably doesn't ave the sense of humor you'd like anyways. I really like that you focused on just one main quality (humor/spontaneity) which focused the profile, but at times showed depth and a serious side to your character. All looks good from here, man! Nice work.

I think your profile is great for the type of girl you're looking for. Maybe you can throw in some more humor spikes, btw your sense of humor is perfect. You started great in the first part, the dose of humor was just right, but later maybe you sound too serious. You come of as very intellectual, some girls might be intimidated by that, but then again it filters out the girls you wouldn't like. I also like to use some funny but deep quotations, I don't know, girls seem to love quotations.

I loved the rock climbing pic, maybe you can throw in some pics where you smile. How are your openers? The phone vs. chat, I usually go for chat to get some comfort and then switch to phone game.

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