I want to know your opinion about this kiss-closer I made up, developing it from a joke. Here it goes:

After getting playful and you feel it's surely time to kiss, you ask, all of it in a playful tone of course:

-Hey, is it fair game to kiss?

Possible answers of the girl:
Girl: No! (big IOD, no good comeback, just continue your comfort routine)

Girl: Um, no? (playfully, or laughing, or giving other IOI anyway)
You: I'll have to cheat, then. (go in for a kiss)

Girl: Maybe.. (pretty much a yes - best case scenario)
You: I'll cheat to make sure. (go in for a kiss)

Girl: Yes.
You: I'll play by the rules then. (go in for kiss. You can just say nothing and go in for the kiss too. You won't get the joke out of it, but whatever)



(BTW, I developed this from a party gag, which goes like "Hey, is it fair game to burp?" (or fart or whatever) and everyone who doesn't know the game already says "Uh, no." then you go "I'm cheating!" and let it out.)

What do you guys think of this line? How to improve it?

its a good k-close but if she's already in that state you dont even need a specific close at all, just kiss her. It does sound a lot like mysterys kiss gambit tho. "do you want a kiss" if she says no you could say "I never said you could have one, it just looked like something was on your mind" if she says maybe or hesitates or says idk you could say "lets find out" then kiss her. If she says yes than just kiss her. I like using that but altering it a little bit if she says yes. If she does say yes I like to say "i'll keep that in mind" and not kiss her. This just builds the tension a lot more and leads to a better first kiss later.

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There are 3 type of players, those who make it happen, those who watch it happen, and those who wonder what just happend. Which one are you?

I knew Mystery's routine, that's why I tried to make it so it's prepared for all answers.
I like your suggestion too! Thanks.

It's a bad idea to ask for a kiss...

I agree - in my opinion, it's never a good idea to ask a girl if you can kiss her. I know Mystery has that similar game, but realistically, body language is way more telling than anything you could say. You usually have a good feel for whether the girl likes you, so if she is going to let you kiss her, she probably doesn't need you to tell her.

K close lines feel like a crutch to me. It's similar to set routines - very useful as training wheels but eventually you will be socially aware enough to throw the routine aside. If you have good kino going and are in a position where you are close to each other, that's all you need

That said - if you are going to go with a gambit like you have above and it makes you feel more comfortable, that one should definitely work forgot to mention that in my last post haha

What's the point in talking about kissing her? It's going to lose you more kisses. It never makes the girl want to kiss you more, and it puts them off a lot of the time even if they wanted to kiss you before. Don't do it...

Yeah, since then I learned that. Eye contact for three seconds and going for it is easier anyway. The game still can be applied for other stuff.