Hey guys, tomorrow i wanna use this story but i just dont know how to conect the story with the opening... i mean i need a frace or something...
check it out:

me: hey guys i need an opinion...
HB: what? (or whatever she or they say...)
me: well i only have a minute, my friends are waiting 4 me, but see i have this blind date next weekend and i dont know if i should go or not...
HB: yeah sure..
me: but what if its a man?.. i mean anybody can send u am e-mail for a date.. (smile hehe)
HB: haha.. (whatever)
me: would u go to a blind date like that?
HB: no
me: so you would make me go to that date.. but you wouldnt do it yourself?? you are not adventurous at all, are you?
HB: (whatever)


so here its time for hdv.. so i though about a story but i dont know what to say maybe a: about adventurous i remember... or something like that? check out the story:

me: last month i was with my ex in a blues concert my friends were playing, it was all cool, but then the band said that for the next song they would need a friend of them to come on stage... and they called me!.. omg i was like: whaat??? me??? i frozed out... they knew i played the guitar, but i dont play much blues.. but once i was on stage it felt like my first time playing... you know all the adrenaline and then you feel great... that was concert was awsome..

well guys also i need ur opinions about the story.. but most important is how to conect them =)

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drop the "my friends are waiting". "i only have a minit" is enough. and the story isnt THAT bad. if its not portrayed right it can kinda seem like you like to talk about yourself a lot, but if you can pull it off, then hey, more power to ya! as far as transitions go, after they tell you how they are adventurous, say something like, you wanna hear about adventurous, let me tell you what happened to me last weekend...

good luck,

PB

Don't use the canned openers. You can take the skeleton of it, but make it more personal. If you don't play guitar, make the second one about something you know about in case they shit test and quiz you about it. The first one is a common opinion opener and works, but they might catch you so I'd recommend using the opinion but fleshing it out with something that really applies to you.

thx guys, well i should delete some details to my story... i will work on it, although i do play the guitar, so i dont think they can catch me with any shit test about that... i'll post the field report once i work on my story thx!

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hey guys what do u think now about the story, check it out:

wanna hear something adventurous... ?
see, last month i was in my friend's band concert and after a song, they invited me to go on stage... i felt like the 1st time playing.. you know all the adrenaline inside of you... playing with them was sooo cool... and the girl i was with got crazy taking pitcures of the band and me.. that was the day i learned to enjoy every single moment of my life.

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