Ok this is really where I decided to make my first real approach. The others i don't feel were that good, they were just more convenient. There was a HB9 sitting with her group of friends. She had on a suit type outfit, It was actually really hot, she looked professional, but still managed to show off her body pretty well. I went up and said something like,

me -"you just getting off work?"
Hb9-"no why?"
me-I don't know it looks like your still wearing your work clothes.
Hb9-"i like your hat"
me-Thanks, I just got it. I talked the bartender into giving it to me because i thought it was cool.
HB9-cant remember what she said here
me-yeah, it was from some fight i guess that happened before i got here
HB9-shows her friends saying hey guys check this out, this is so cool, he is wearing the hat from the fight.
me-"oh you saw it"
hb9-"yeah, i cant believe you got the hat, thats so cool."
Me-"I can only stay for a second, my friends are ready to leave soon"

around here is when i think her friends took a picture of us, i put my arm around her waist and smiled for the camera. I started talking to the friends a little ignoring the HB9. Her friends showed us the picture.

me-I think i read this line in the game or here on one of the posts "we make a good looking couple don't you think" she agreed.
Hb9-"so whats your name?'
me-"(my real name), you?"
hb9"told me her name"

We got into a discussion about our jobs and all.

me-"hey, i really got to get going." This is definately a line from the game. "how can we continue this conversation another time?"
HB9-looks at me confused
me- a little slower "how can we continue this conversation another time?"
HB9-another confused look.
me-whats your number?

She gave it to me with a smile. I looked over at my friend who i had left by herself the whole time, she looked uncomfortable because some creepy guy was hitting on her. As we left she grabbed my hand, because she told the guy i was her boyfriend so he'd leave her alone.

Please guys, some constructive critique, I realized afterwards some things i could have done differently and all there is just so much information to remember at the time.

Also, if any quick suggestions on my next move, please post. My goal, to get her to bed ASAP.

the first thing that jumps out is that there isnt really any negs .. . unless you consider the work clothes thing a neg . . . is this happend not too long after 5 pm its not really a neg.

a good thing to have said "thats my friend blah, you see that guy over there. . . he tried hitting on her so I agreed to pretned to be her BF. . . so dont get too jealous when you see me leave with her" C-F.