OK, met a HB7 in australia about 8 months ago, didn't know a thing about game then but had some natural game going on with her, so i didn't completely F up but still couldn't get K close..

Sent her a message this evening. Want her to come to the Uk, so I can finish the job I started..

I'm interested in your opinion on what I said and what I should go on to say to her.

Any ideas would be great, as i'm pretty new to this..

SO THIS IS HOW IT WENT:

ME: How's auz, what you up to at the moment?

HER: hey! it's not too bad at the moment, a little bit cold for spring though. how's england? is that where you are at the moment? i'm about to go to uni, only one week left what are you doing these days?

ME: England's cold, its autumn here. One week left of uni! sweet! What are you going to do when you finish, you should go traveling, maybe come to europe, then you can come and see me in London. I've been working in Film since I got back from Australia, went to Ibiza, and got back from spain a week ago. How are things with, you? I haven't spoken to you in a long time. what's changed?

HER: oh wow! how exciting! i would love to go to spain. i'd love to go anywhere in europe actually haha. melbourne is pretty boring recently. i'm most likely doing a contiki tour when i finish my course in 3 years. such a long time away ! but i would love to go to london one day! my brother is possibly getting a job up there, so if i visit him, i can visit you hmm, what's changed? my hair is longer? and that's really about it i think.. how boring. what about you?

What should I say??????

Cheers

Well seeing as how I myself am a newbe I dont know how good this advice is. Instinct and based upon everything Ive been reading and working on tells me that you should continue to DHV with stories even if they're made up. you might also want to through a jealousy tact her way later on by telling her about an ex or this girl at the bar or club that was all over you make it humorious by telling her something like she threw up all over your shoes or she had horrible breath like a corps fart.
dont be afraid to change the thread and keep parts of it open, if I were you id save asking about her brothers job till later when you cant think of anything else to say, don't mention the coming over to london again untill later either otherwise you may appear to be a nag (remember neg not nag) make her life slightly more exciting when you do bring up london and her brother again, tell her things you want to with her, maybe use a thread where you tell her you want to dress her up as a nun and you as a priest and sell hotdogs on the beach (i think thats a thread by lovedrop, might be matador its one of mysteries boys). thats about all I have right now good luck I cant wait to hear how it ends up... keep me posted so I know.