Hey guys,

So I've been learning all these DHV routines but I've never been really good at telling stories. Here's an example of one of my stories. Could one of you maybe correct it or help me out...I would really appreciate it...thanks

"You won’t believe what I’ve done. Have you ever jumped out of plane? I went skydiving! You know the feeling when you’re just sitting in the plane and you look out of the window and you get this feeling of butterflies in your stomach. Now imagine...jumping out. I was sitting...on the edge of the plane thinking “holy shit’’. I wasn’t scared at first, just excited. My friend, she was scared shitless. I had to calm her down. I was like “breathe with me...this is supposed to be fun. We gave each other a big hug and continued’’. My instructor was like “On the count of three, let’s go’’ I was like “one, two, fuck it’’ and then you just drop....200km/h. You feel your body pumping full of adrenaline and you’re just flying looking at the world thinking “here I come, give me a hug’’

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I'm rare, like mr. clean with hair. No break lights on my career - lil wayne

nice little story..

you should have a couple of other ones on you just incase your story gets interupted.. heres how to make your own, think of a embarrising/ funny story take out anything crude and shorten it.. boom your done eg.

you remind me of this friend i had a bet... she won... which meant i had to wear a superman costume to our uni exam. i went into a costume store for a superman costume and couldnt find one at this point i was cheering cause i wouldnt have to go through with the bet just as i was about to leave the store a guy comes in returning a superman suit.. so i hired it and headed to my uni exam.. i went into my exam and my teacher told me to step out side.. so outside my teacher says to me "i cant let you in like that, why are you dressed like superman?" i squinted my eyes and said "i am superman" she laughed and let me do my exam .... i got 94 percent ..


take a funny/ embarrisng story shorten it to maybe 2 minutes

Roma, you missed the point. There's a lot of NLP in Winners' story, or maybe yours are very subtle.

Winner, I'd take all that NLP crammed in the story and spread it out through the conversation. If you're looking to increase your DHV, sounding so hyped out and rambling probably makes you look like a dunce rather than increase your value.

(by the way, I've just been lurking for a couple of days, take this as a new guy trying to raise his post count if you took any offence, sorry.)

*edit* my reasoning behind why you'd look like a dunce is that it seems like you're trying too hard to impress her. In the MM, your story should be told after the opening and negs, it'd seem to me as if you're showing too much interest, seeing as she has not yet earned her rights for you to be interested yet.

PTJ hes story is good i didnt say it wasnt.. im just suggesting he have more than one story.. sometimes you get interupted and cant go on with the story..

the superman story
is a canned routine taught by alex from

http://succeedatdating.com/

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any man can sweep a woman off her feet... he just needs the right broom - alex hitchens

Alright thanks a lot guys. Yeah Roma you're right...I need more than one story definitely. I think the Superman routine is really good. We'll definitely use it

Part time Jesus, what did you mean with the NLP. I know what it is but I didn't know I was using it. Do we need NLP in our stories. I'm aware to embedd DHV spikes which I thought I did...like:

Health= doing extreme sports
Protector of Loved ones = calming my female friend down

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I'm rare, like mr. clean with hair. No break lights on my career - lil wayne

writing storys are good to practice but in-field i have came up with so many storys of my dog died alot of drunk storys or like juggler says he can make up a story of his groceriers list the point is dont make the story so entertaining make your self be interesting evan if yu were sleep ing all day "so i was lying in my bed then yu wont belive what happend, took one of my grandma's acid saw a lady naked walking around the house i normally woulda been scared but she was a hb10 so i was turnd on, now i know that lady who my grandma keeps saying smoked all her cigerates everyday!" or "so last night i was walking home saw my unckle at the bar so went to have a drink with him and we talked about evrrything he bought me so much food though i was stuffd kept telling him its not the last super" lol made it up now but yu get the point dont be so serious