Today i went to a super store to open a set. Saw cute employee arranging the men's deo product in shelf. The store was not much crowded. I casually went up to her and had following converstaions:
Me: is this where you put the discounted products?
She:yes. The other shelf has all the products which are not on discount.
[ I already had visited the other shelf]
Me: oh.. is that so? I am looking for a good men deo and am not able to find a good one. Do you mind helping me out on the other side.. i can wait...
She: ok.. sure..

she took couple of minutes arranging her few items and walked me to other shelf.. I looked confused and asked for her opinion. she pulled one axe deo and she goes:
she: i think this one is good.
she sprays that in air..
Me: eeww.. it smells more lilke sweet smell...
She sprays another on her hand and ask me to smell her hand..
Me: now.. you smell like a man...Smile)
we both were laughing..
she sprays another deo on hand.. and I tell her that is spicy, chocolate,aqua,lemony etc..
than we kind of slow down.. and she asks to go back to her old shelf.
Me: Ok.. i will follow you and pick something from that shelf.. if i do not like it.. than i would return it.
she: ok.
I pick something.. shake her hand.. and leave....
Write my phone number on paper .. come back and tell her..
me: i forgot to mention that i enjoyed your company so much today.. i was wondering if we can do this again..
she: just looks taken back.. with eyes wide open [ neither Yes nor NO]
Me: Ok.. lets do one thing.. i would give you my number and you call me..
i walk out and tell her.. that i really enjoyed her company .. and we should do this again.. gave her thumbs up.. she said thanks.. and i walked out.

Appreciate if all the PUA experts can give their opinions .. about what i did wrong, whet i did right.. where do i need to improve..

You made 3 posts for the same topic. That's quite overdoing it.

Try not to do that anymore.
Men's deo?
The fuck is that? =p

(EDIT: OH...deoDERANT. Psh...)
Well, at least you're in the moment, speaking in blabbermouth. For that, I smile.
Now THAT'S a good opener.
I can wait? What are you, a pussy?

That sentence was good, until ...I can wait...
You have testicles; do you not also own the frame?
Dude, you're thinking.
You're already in fuck up mode.

Be in the moment. Maximize it. You realize saying "I can wait" made more of a mess for you.

But DONT THINK AND DWELL on that. Fuck what I said. Stay in the moment. Don't think.
Yay, you recovered, and she likes you. Man, women are forgiving creatures.
Shit test.
Passed shit test. Be a man, always in the moment, be the man.

she: ok.
I pick something.. shake her hand.. and leave....
Write my phone number on paper .. come back and tell her..
me: i forgot to mention that i enjoyed your company so much today.. i was wondering if we can do this again..[/quote]

Eh, not the best of closers, but the intent and frame was 100% good!
Practice, practice, practice.
She's flattered. Usually, you
Wait, what?

Dude, that sentence was so incoherent...I did not understand it.

Did you tell her that, or was it what happened? I am confused.
What you did right: Everything
What you did wrong: Thinking and dwelling on things.

Stay in the moment. You did good.
And remember; #s game. #s game.

I don't see any attraction in this interaction whatsoever.

I can remember the days when it took me courage even to do this much, but for real, this has absolutely nothing in it that would make me think that girl would ever call you.

"I enjoyed your company so much today" could really come off creepy and needy.

If you had already established attraction in her, you could say something like:
"Well here's my phone number... I could tell you wanted it and I'm not a mean person so I wasn't just gonna, you know, walk out of your life like that" smiling of course...

i agree with origami.. you have to make her want to call you.. try buildin attraction and pushin and pullin..

Guys,
Thanks for the feedback.. i would work on it more and keep posting for more of your feedbacks.. appreciate your help though

You don't want to give her that kind of control by giving her your number... remember woman are followers, not leaders. You're the man, you must lead... that's just the way it is.

Instead of just taking down her number, I always swap numbers though, so she'll know who's calling and if you've played your game right, you don't get the whole "Who's this?".


And the reason that she was so stiffled with you giving your number to her was because it was really unexpected. I mean, you were indirect the whole way, and you even left. And then you came back and you go direct with her? Casually let it flow into the conversation... "Wow, you're really good at picking men's deo huh, I wonder what else you're good at" (Lame example, don't use that one, but the idea is in the mindset... look for reasons to go direct, besides her good looks.)


Other than that, good job on approaching and escalating by pushing for the number. Keep it up!

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An approach a day keeps the guru away.

personally the only time I gave my number out recently (and when I say recent I mean almost two months ago) was when I kc'd this girl after my bag got stolen. She enjoyed herself but did she call me? no. actually I gave her my fb, as my phone was stolen but same principal.
Don't trust girls to make moves for you. Maybe a small amount will call you if you do that but not many. Even if they like you. My one example is I know a friend who ahd this boy she liked for ages. It was only till she was over him that she added him on facebook...

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:p

I agree with the previous 2 posts. I never give my number anymore. I used to but it never worked, even when I thought I established a good rapport. I think women perceive it as weak and awkward. They are waiting for a man to lead. Just act like it is no big deal and they will too.