Hey, I would love some feedback on my profile.

Yea, have ripped off a few peeps ideas, but hey Im not inventing the wheel here!

http://www.plentyoffish.com/viewprofile ... d=17178170

Cheers

Ok seem as though you asked, the pics are truly awful you dont have any clear face pics and have several silly random ones.

You sound very geeky, listing chess and cartoons as an interest isn't going to sell yourself well at all.

Your occupation is list as entrepeneur, this to a female translates as pretending to be rich or as someone who dreams up silly get rich quick schemes.

The final nail in the coffin here is the bit where you say you get tons of messages.

Well, I disagree with most of what you say, but I have taken some on board and done a few tweaks.

Im actually very happy with the results I get and the feedback from the girls is all good. Im not it it just for the numbers, Im more choosy than that. I want it to put some women off, they are often the ones I dont care for.

As for the images, I have tried and tested about 30 different main images over a number of months. The 2/3 serious images have been the most successful ones. The silly images show my personality and add something different, something for the women to comment on.

The last thing I want it to conform like the millions of cob-web-dick pricks on there!

I also disagree with your comments about being an entrepreneur - this is actually what I do - lol, although I have now changed it!

Oh well,

Always good to get a different opinion.

Screening and disqualifying. Amen! Wow! Someone's been paying attention!

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Johnny
www.organicseduction.com

Personally I think your profile is too long. But that is just me.

Also, some of the best advise you could get are from girls with regards to POF profiles. I ask them what they think of my profile all the time and get loads of insight, plus they like to help out whenever they can. Its a win-win.

You mention that you just are looking for 'friends'...if that is the case..then girls that are looking for just the same (i.e. not sexual) then I can see how that works for you...But if not, then I would change it to something else.

Best,

J-Dub

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J-Dub in DC

Its better to be the predator than the prey.

You need to be a good player if your gonna be successful at the game.

Well, a few slight tweaks and Im actually happy with it now.

Yes, im not getting anywhere near the amount of interest that I had gotten with other profiles, but the women are much better quality. Amen.

Having asked a few bunnies for comments on it, the general feeling is that the Dear Santa is a bit too much. That will be replaced on the next update me thinks.

Probably something to do with the women here in the UK. (RE: my earlier posts about cocky and funny not going down that well in the UK).

Aside from the whole Dear Santa rant, I think the context in your profile is actually good.

I think your pictures could be a problem. I'm not trying to be offensive, but they look very feminine and are incongruent with the text in your profile. You're trying to be alpha and assertive in your text, but your pictures make you look soft (which wouldn't be a problem if your text was more congruent with your image).

Yes, new photos are in hand. Cheers.

Your opening scares me. I don't get it, but it gives me a serial killer kind of vibe. You British, so weird. Junk the pictures that aren't you and don't criticize a girl out of sending you a "boring" message. All messages are IOI's.