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PostPosted: Fri May 07, 2010 4:39 am 
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First time poster, but I've been lurker these forums recently!

I haven't been getting as many replies as I used to, so any input on my profile is very much appreciated!

Yes not everything on my profile is original! Please be harsh, my profile isn't very risky, so let me know what I should add or remove, as well as my photos!

Thanks for the help!

http://www.plentyoffish.com/viewprofile ... d=11186499[


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PostPosted: Fri May 07, 2010 6:18 pm 
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I would lose the third picture. That guy is totally overshadowing you and makes you look like a sidekick. The other pictures are great.

As for the text, you don't tell much about yourself. The girls probably didn't, but I saw this same profile maybe ten times already. It is funny in some parts, but it doesn't describe you well as a person.

You've got good looks and great social proof, but I think you would get exponentially better results (I don't know what you're getting now, but it doesn't matter) if you rewrote the profile from scratch.

Just my 2 cents.


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PostPosted: Sat May 08, 2010 4:12 am 
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Thanks for the help, I cropped out everyone else in the pic hahah

I'll redo my profile and report back, thanks!


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PostPosted: Sun May 16, 2010 11:10 am 
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I think it's better to only have a few pictures. I don't know why. There's good humor in there, but you have to give an equal amount of substance, otherwise you're just a comedian. It probably wouldn't hurt to make your profile twice as long.


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