Steve Slik,
Yeah, that sample profile has some really excellent shit, but needs to be watered down a little. If you don't care, why are you trying so hard and long to drive the point home? It sounds like the guy who says he doesn't care what you think, but then name drops a bunch of celebrities or mentions that he drives an import ferrari in passing. Maybe you should just put up pictures of your abs and shit and be like "Look at my pictures, 'nuff said." in your profile. I totally think what you have will work with some tweaking. It's funny you only got desperate and self-punishing girls.

haha, love it!! deffo going to test something similar to this!!

in hindsight, I agree with you about watering it down a little. It was just a test to see how far it could be pushed. I haven't revised it yet, thinking about it I have not even checked the profile for about two weeks or more.....