Since I've gotten to NYC I've stepped my game up approaching its Saturday night and I had plans to go to a club out in the City but since I'm not 21+ that means my age fucks me. My friend hits me up to go out to some girls house and warns me shes ugly. I didn't care I just wanted a reason to get out the house. I go out to the croner to ctach a bus (which I never do, I usually walk to the subway) and I go to the back and sit next to a HB 7 didn't really pay much attention to her than. Get off the bus a stop before the initial stop and run the rest of the way and sit on the subway train, a couple minutes of sitting there the same girl I sat next to on the bus comes in the train and we make I look at her and we make mild eye contact. I took this as a sign and told myself "Fuck It". I wait for the train to start rolling and as soon as it does I stand up (shes standing 7 feet behind me) walk towards her and lean on the door (she has her back towards me) was this a good idea opening from the back ? there really wasnt that much space to work with.

me: you could've just asked for my number instead of talking to me
HB: (she turns around and takes headphones off, I failed to notice she had these on) what ? (smiling)
me: (I notice she has a purse that says "Colombia" on it) :O your from Colombia ?? I just came from there four days ago (true story)
HB: where you from ??
fluff

fluff

fluff

me: what do you like doing ?
HB: I don't like drinking or smoking
me: well do you like dancing ?
HB: yes I do.
me: you need to teach me ! I don't know how to dance unfortunately. let me get your number and I'll call you from lessons only If you don't charge me though

she gives me her number and after I tell her that I guarantee is she comes with me right than and there I'd guarantee shed have more fun with me. but she said she already had plans.

what do you guys think ?
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Well it sounds like you did well, but I will say that the content of that fluff is important. If it's just small talk, that's bad. It's all stuff she's heard before, and it's not interesting to her. You have to be different, and ask unusual, yet interesting, open ended questions. But maybe you did that and just don't remember what you said. If so, then never mind.