Hey

I keep on looking at my profile and think it's alright but a part of me tells me that it's not perfect. I may be stressing myself out because it's not perfect but it's kinda frustrating.

Being fun or exciting? I think I have a hard time with that. In person I'm fine but online it's difficult. On the profile it says, "About me" so I'm thinking about me like what do I do that is fun. I know if I spice it up a bit then I'll be happy. However, it's kind of hard to make my profile sound fun and exciting like I'm a Pirate on the Caribbean.

I know if I list all the things that I like doing and shit that it will eb kind a boring. I had once that my life was kinda like a cia classified file locked away but then I looked at it after a girl commented that i sounded like I was under the influence-which kinda sounds right. I did sound like I smoked a pound of dope. haha! Not saying weed isn't good but it is. Anyways, need some advice here people.

I asked in group during basic social group on exciting conversations to start with and she did a group for me that was aimed on being exciting and fun in real life, not on the net. Anyways, peace! Thanks for the help!

http://www.okcupid.com/profile/PapaBear81

That's my profile. Somewhere it doesn't sound so hot. Thanks!

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You're falling into the "boyfriend resume" trap. I understand that the section says "About Me" but I've found that it's best to use that section to outline your standards. What kind of chick are you looking for? How does she act? How does she dress? The more specific you can think of, the better. Try to put yourself into the frame of the employer screening applicants. Tell women what you're looking for....without being a dick of course. List specifics. That way, when you message women (and they feel like they can live up to your expectations), they will feel special because they've been selected to fill a very unique position: your new girlfriend/date/fb/etc...

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Thanks man, I'll do that. Also, I was told to leave a mysterious kinda tone to my profile as well. You know, leave it open for the girls to guess. What about hinting what I am like in the about section. Would that be any good?

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You can cover the mysterious part by not talking about your job. Chicks see my profile and it says that I'm a pirate. The next week it will say I'm a rock star. My pictures show me playing a musical instrument, shooting a bow, hanging out at a party, etc.

My about me section is intentionally vague about ME, other than what I'm looking for in my women. So not only does it screen for those, but it adds that element of mystery inherently, make sense?

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