ok guys
last night i pulled of the biggest move of my life yet on a girl. howeverthere were many flaws. i met her earlier that night and then later on with another guy making out at the bar! to cut it short i managed to get her number in front of the guy. i mostly did it to prove a point to myself but about ten minutes later she left the guy and went home while looking at me smiling with direct eye contact.
here is the problem. when i gother number i openly said "you can go home with this guy and have fun or you could take the risk and gimme your number!"
in my opinion i came across very needy and off my game.
now im interested in calling her and i know due to the neediness i showed i should wait at least 3 days. but the biggest challenge is how?
what can i possibly say in a text message that wont get ignored cuz if i call her she may just not pick up.
any ideas on how i should word the text?

cheers guys

I don't see anything wrong with that line. Perfect number pull. I would not text it. I would think of some more clever openers and ways to respond when she says "who is this"... then immediately; use your smooth skills. "so i am ready for you to take that risk with me now". I am going to blah blah blah at blah blah blah time and you can tag along. If she says she can't that day. Say, "oh good; i haven't asked my friend if it's cool if u can come yet anyway. hmmm i am busy blah blah blah... i might be able to squeeze you in this day". Then yeah, set up a definite time and place, then text 2 hours before meeting and say your almost ready and you will meet her there, but your phone is almost dead and you broke your charger. (that way she can't stand u up)

Then yeah... be smooth, kino, kiss close, you should be able to F-close it sounds like.

I like texts as a flirty gimmick just after you get their number, if you can say something relevant, some joke between you two, something like that.

But asking someone to come out with you via text is akin to asking a question during sex, like "Can I please have a blowjob?" it's too passive. You would say "I want you to go down on me so bad." for example. So when you text to ask them out it's not very convincing. If you call, you have the opportunity to get them all excited about it with the way you're talking and want to meet you, make them come out to something they wouldn't otherwise have, just by talking to them. I feel like women instinctively know this, I imagine they read a text asking them out and instantly feel - why didn't he call me and ask?

Also, no matter what happened in the past, don't try and compensate for it. If you have a good idea or a plan, call up, and do it. The only choice is to move forward like everything is cool and always has been. You throw women into this mindset when you behave like this.