I've tried this on 4 girls now, heres the result so far

its a translation from swedish..
Girl1: 19y
Me - Damn, that girl on your photo is cute

, do you think you can hook us up ?
HB8 - I have a lot of pictures, which one do you mean ?
Me - The one on your profile picture :O can you tell her that she has beautiful eyes and ask for her number.. dont tell her it was me who asked..
HB8 - Hahaha. but its me ... haha!
Me - Dont take credit from the poor girl! :O and dont tell her i said anything..
HB8 - okeey no :S but its still me on the picture :S
Me - Oooh wth xD play along :O do I have to come over and learn you to be fun
HB8 - haha

you should just know what humor i got
Me - haha how should i know that :O

( i didnt know what to write here and i was kinda in a hurry so it was the best that i thought of )
she has'nt answered yet on the last one, but she hasnt read it either.
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Girl2: 18y
Me - Damn, that girl on your photo is cute

, do you think you can hook us up ?
HB7,5 - haha, maybe.
Me - Good

can you tell her that she has a beautiful smile and ask her for her number . But dont tell her it was me who asked (:
HB7,5 - Okeey, she says thanks

but what happens if she doesnt want to give her number ?

(Here i really felt that the number thing was a bit too much, maybe could've asked for her MSN instead)
Me - well then ill have to charm her

i think you should tell her that a superhot guy wants her number, i have a feeling she'll give it then
No answer yet here, but she hasnt read it yet
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Girl3: 16y
Me - Damn, that girl on your photo is cute

, do you think you can hook us up ?
HB8 - Thats me, so thx for the compliment, and theres noway in hell i would do that
Me - ouuw wrong answer, your no fun
No answer yet here but she hasnt read it yet xD
And girl4 hasnt read the first msg yet
so what do you think ? what are my mistakes ? room for improvement ?