Ok so I think I have a fairly decent start to an online opener but Im having a little trouble in the transition part in the middle of the message. Here is what I have so far:

Subject: I like your profile(or something in profile I like) but...

Body: ...(I then neg her on something in one of her pics or something else in her profile.)

I'm sure that you get a ton of emails from guys telling you how beautiful you are and how much they have in common with you. And I could do that but why waste your time reading and my time writing with a boring email. Ugh... I hate writing those tedious messages.

So lets play a game, its called "Would you rather" Ill start. (I then ask a would you rather question).

Let me know if anyone has any suggestions on how to improve this.

I think it'll work depending on the site you go to

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