Ok, im new to this and i have everything to learn and thats why im writing this. I decided to for the first time since i started taking interest in this to try it out. I was at a club, I was very nervous. But after a while me and my friend had been talking to a few girls at the club. He was standing with a two set and i went over there. This one HB7.5 started to touch me and i did the whole "hey this shit aint for free" thing and she looked very confused. I left the set but later that night she came up to me and this is what happened.

HB: Are you having fun?

Me: Yea.

HB: Is that other guy really your brother? (My friend told them we were brothers..)

Me: Yes we are.

HB: Do you remember me. We said hi earlier..

Me: I remember you were all over me..

HB giggling: Hehe yea right.

Me: I can tell right a way your not my type.. We could never work..

HB confused: Well... That doesnt mean i cant come over here and be nice to you.

Me: Thats good i like that! Giving her a big smile and tapped her shoulder with my underarm.

HB smiling!

Me: Is this your kind of music?

HB: No i like rock.

Me: Good.. What kind of rock?

She didnt really know what to say but she liked everythin that i suggested and she was agreeing with everything i was saying. IOI?

I thinght everything was going goo but when we started playing games (the one where i tell her to answer 5 questions and get them all wrong. She didnt really get the game and i the middle of it she walked away. Why? What did i do wrong? I would really appreciate all help i could get! And also this other girl came up to me and said "you look nice.. do you think im cute? alot of people say im cute.." whats a good way to answer something like that?

Thanks everybody!

I might do this if I were in state enough...

girl:"you look nice... do you think im cute? alot of people say i'm cute."
you (make good eye contact and grin): "your elbows are too pointy, but you do have cute hands"
*examine her hand*
you (while examining her hands): you know what i feel like dancing let's go
*grab her hand and lead her over to the dance floor*

I don't know, though...

there's a lot of ways you can take that congruence test.

"your elbows are too pointy, but you do have cute hands"

Nice1

hands are brilliant, if your in the right moment touching or comparing sizes of hands and touching finger tips will be game set and match!

Yea thats good thank you!

Im wondering more about why i lost that first one tho

Well.. a big thing that beginners worry about is what to say more than how to say it.. you seem to be saying the right thing, but i dont know what you really look like, but make sure you use hand gestures and eye contact like crazy... even learnhow to pretend laugh (realistically).. trust me, how you say it is 80 percent, and what u say is 20 percent..chances are, a girl won't remember what you told her at a club 30 minutes after, but she will remember you confidence and how socialable you are..

It sounds to me like your thinking too much of the game and not actually playing the game. What I think happened is the girl gives you a bit of IOI and then you started doing your "sets". It also sounded to me like your "trying to hard" with your sets. You got to make it sound naturally and not pre planned.
For example
Imagine this
"You know what, that shit aint for free" *laughs NATURALLY*
and this
"you know waht, that shit aint for free" *looks nervous*

this first one is definitely going to work and the second work kinda makes it look like your trying. I'm not saying that might be what happened but that's just my inference from the information provided.

Okay first of all it's only a failure if you didn't try or you don't learn from your mistake. I am going to have to say as well that the problem is in your delivery. I had a friend I taught a few things to, he would tell me about his attempted pick ups and they sounded good until I went out with him and saw the delivery. He seemed to be way too serious, when he would say something CF he would come off to the target as just a pissed off asshole. So just work on the delivery, make it sound natural and just have a good time and it will come with practice.

-Goodluck

cheers guys i jst read the replies and i see where i go wrong i feel that my opener do u belive in magic i go too deep into it like say "if i make water from two gases u cant see isnt that magic?" is that a bit nerdish? i use alot of hand useage and i am confident just find it hard to go from that to a normal topic any help?

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Thanks for the advice! I think you could be right! And i really dont see this as a failiure even if i said so i know i just need practice! And with help from all of you guys i think this might work! I am worried about how much you should neg a girl tho. And should you neg her if she starts giving you IOI's? Or does that mean i broke through the bitch sheild? And what if she approaches you?

Thanks guys!