I have worse game than you all COMBINED! Lmao. Seriously, you wouldn't believe my bad luck when I shoot openers on myspace.

The only myspace opener that ever works is "nice hair, is it real "

Everything else has failed me lmao. Everytime I use a joke opener, it's taken literally. God only knows why.

So I'm going to post my about me section and my pictures. Maybe we can locate an issue together



My about me:

Sup! My name is Thomas

What's that you say? You want to know about ME? Well, I am an undercover superhero. Aside from that, I love art, scary movies, and purple lined sunsets.

I love meeting new people

I keep things light, but I know when to be serious

Yeah I am a bit mysterious, sure. It's boring to be too open book.

Get to know me, I'm sure I'd like to get to know you back.



Pictures:















Maybe it's cuz I live in cold little PA, right near Pittsburgh. (Which is rated one of the worst places on Earth to meet your mate lol)

Idk, I probably just suck.

dude, you have serious inner game issues. I suggest before worrying about getting a mate, do some reevaluations on your attitude. There's no reason you should be saying you suck. There are people out there who murder and steal, those ppl suck, not you.
I don't think your problem is your looks (I'm a guy so take that with a grain of salt). It's probably the city. Let's face it, if you were in a bigger city your chances would go up, simply from a numbers point of view.

Read some inner game material. YOU are the prize. Women are the most abundant resource on earth.

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Hi ThomasX,

thanks for sharing and having the balls to show your profile text and pics.

I like the text but I think the undercover superhero bit may be a bit too childish. Purple lined sunsets?? A bit weird in my opinion.

Ok is the first photo really that way orientated on the site? If so rotate the thing!
The first black and white photo looks a bit prison-ish
The photo where you're holding a camera or phone. It looks as though it's a solo thing taken in a mirror. I'd ditch that one.

As for looks I'd say you have no problems, kind of quirky attractive.If you really want to get an opinion go and post some pics on Hot or Not or some other rating site. Myself I posted on Hot or Not. On an average day I would rate myself as a 6, good day 8 and a bad day 1! I got a 9.4 with one photo so I'm rather pleased. Ultimately it's how YOU feel about yourself.

As for jokes online being taken literally, don't worry about it. If the girls are that brainless not to understand a decent joke you're better off without them.

I think it would also help if you detach yourself from gaming and treat it more like an experiment where you do things and analyse the results. There is no failure only feedback on your actions you take.Use that feedback to change your actions.

Hope these comments are useful

Thank you ma friends. I have updated the profile as such and shall try for sure to think of myself in a higher light. Lol

My area really does suck. I don't think the top pickup artists would have any luck round here lmao.

ThomasX,

Is your area or worse than mine? I live near Gland in Switzerland - population about 11,000. nearest city is Geneva pop 190,000, next nearest Lausanne pop 130,000. That's about it for 'local' people. Factor in that approximately half speak English... I'm trying to make the best of it. The Swiss are humourless drones and the women have reps of being chain smoking coffee swilling miserable faced bitches. The few Swiss women I know are just weird and have little sex appeal. Well that sums up the country.

For a laugh go onto Plenty of Fish website and do a search in Switzerland it's abysmal in terms of numbers. Then use it to search your local area.

I'm seriously thinking of moving back to England , fuck it! London is much better! More people, more to do, more opportunities.

Lmao your area does suck pretty bad. But over here where I live in PA, is rated one of the worst places on earth to meet your mate. (Near pittsburgh area).

I used to model in pittsburgh and met plenty of girls that way but I moved north of pitt about an hour and didn't wanna continue driving 5 times a week there, so I lost my main source of meeting girls. (Hot ones anyways).

So I'm pretty much stuck getting em either @ my college or @ myspace. And my college is a small campus, so thats a bad idea. My ex actually is in one of my classes. Awkward......

Maybe I should try gaming on facebook..

I've read many things about the geographic area you should do your gaming in. One guru suggested that girls should be within 15 minutes drive. If I restricted it that way I'd only have my village as a gaming area! For me I've decided that if I cannot get to them in 1 and half hours I'm not interested.

Despite having a tremendous amount of thin, fit looking women it's target poor over here.The women here seem too serious and not fun at all.

For me I'm tired of the place and need to a more populated place.

Remember ThomasX what they A 5 in the bed is worth more than a 10 in the head. It's worth considering the lower rated girls

Lmao the point of being a pickup artist is picking up hot girls.

I used to be able to do that. But I lost my main source of meeting them.

We should both move to california and be done with it.

you should have pictures of you smiling.
"Get to know me, I'm sure I'd like to get to know you back." maybe it's a little needy.
"What's that you say? You want to know about ME? " too cocky IMO.
you can just go "Well, I am an undercover superhero..." that's cocky and funny.
"Sup! My name is Thomas " SUP?! maybe sup is a little bit to much.
"I love meeting new people " that's cool IMO!
"Yeah I am a bit mysterious, sure. It's boring to be too open book." hmmm idk... mysterious people don't say they are mysterious. know what i mean?
don't act too cool for school...

besides that you look very good! and i believe you can get a lot of girls mate! but as xiagox said work on your inner game first and then the things that you write about yourself will be as good as gold naturally.

Thank you very much Warrior for the constructive criticism. You're the man. Do you have a myspace or anything so I can get an idea of what to put?

Well hell, can anyone post their profiles for reference so I can get an understanding of what successful online sargers say?


Or just maybe can you tell me what I should put in mine based off how I look? I think girls tend to think I look like I'd be a player, and thus, when my profile is too nice or something they get paranoid. A few other girls told me they're intimidated and scared I'd turn them down. At first that is flattering, but after being alone for a few months, it's a huge negative...

Oh thank you very much ThomasX, I'm glad i could help.
I sometimes use FaceBook to meet girls but I prefer day game.
I don't have myspace but I do have facebook, I don't write there things about me, I do have pictures of me and I write on friends wall and stuff but I don't write there a lot about me cuz facebook is not for dating so it's a little bit different.

for online openers go here:
perfect-internet-game-woah-vt39020.html
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feel free to PM me

Each to his own. My experience is that I'd prefer to be with someone with a great attitude rather than just looks.I'd go with a 6 if they were great in other ways.Great personality. Sexually adventurous. Looks are mainly subjective and ultimately down to the individual. of course if I could get a perfect 10 in looks and attitude I'd go for that.I'm too jaded to chase perfection though.

Get Insider Internet Dating I think you'll find it very useful. Or PM me and I should be able to mail you a relevant section from it about setting up your profile. As it's personal you cannot use a template as such but there are guidelines as to what to include or leave out

This is a link to the guys POF page

http://www.plentyoffish.com/member2505949.htm
http://www.plentyoffish.com/member2505949.htm

and this is his Match.com profile, pretty much the same

http://www.match.com/profile/showprofil ... 8d9V17vHY=
http://www.match.com/profile/showprofil ... 8d9V17vHY=

Read the text and you can see lots of techniques - humour, qualification etc etc.

Strangely I think you will need to downplay things if you say girls are intimidated

I PMd you but dont know if it worked warrior. Try PMing me.

And damn, that dudes profile seriously put stuff into perspective. I think I'll use some of it lol!

Or how bout this, if I put this as my profile, I'll get all kinds of women. I'll put

"I am a pickup artist

I view all women as objects

Now get in the bed and then in the kitchen"

Testing now


lol jk!

Glad you found the profile/s useful to look at. I like the humour and the qualifiers he puts in. I think the text is too long imho but it works for him and that's what counts.

It could work for you that you play up to the PUA image. Make it ambiguous. I think your text is a little too strong.

One thing I do in my profile/description online is to write something like:-

My modesty prevents me from bragging, but former girlfriends have described me as sexy, handsome, fun, a good kisser...and those are the descriptions I can write here without being censored.

I think it demonstrates experience, fun, sexuality (most descriptions are very coy or sterile) , mystery and a hint of bad-boy or danger - just what is censored?. It's also a self promotion by proxy.

I did a profile once where I was using sexual metaphors and languaging patterns from Sexual Key. Too complex to explain here but to a man the language sounds utterly weird but to a woman, it's meant to sound romantic and sexual.It's poetic and rich language. It's meant to be used verbally but in text it can be fairly powerful. I did the profile as an experiment. Some women who i contacted read my profile and liked what I wrote. I was even contacted by one woman out of the blue and asked if my profile was for real and if I was on drugs!

Another time I did a profile and following advice I made myself out to be a selfish asshole. I think Style used this approach when he first started using online dating and personals.I'll find the link. Here it is ....www.seductiontuition.com/neil.../online ... -game.html .
http://www.seductiontuition.com/neil... ... -game.html
It seems to have been hijacked by the Stealth Attraction report. But you can get to the original by going through google and search for that page and using cache.

I remember writing to one girl and I negged her strongly about a photo she posted where she was wearing a hat. I actually REALLY like girls who wear hats I think they're cute. I didn't say that of course, I said she looked kind of stupid and did she wear the hat ALL the time, implying in bed of course. We had a bit of an email tennis where we negged each , it got more suggestive each time. It screwed up because I couldn't get it offline or even to personal email or chat before my access to that dating site expired.I guess I could get a date if a similar situation occurred nowadays.

So try different types of profile...serious, fun, vague, descriptive, outlandlish, short, long, no photos , photos.

i think you shouldnt make it look like a personal to hook up. Make your page look like your there to have fun and stay in touch with buddies.

post some pics of your hobbies etc.. sports, collection , your car *if its unique/cool imo*.

The guys who look like they party alot get alot of attention. *not house parties, but like clubs etc* i used to be a club promotor for some hollywood clubs a few years ago and i used to get all kinds of attention.. now i fell far away from that and those same girls dont hit me up anymore. lol

Good luck! im startin to feel myspace game is dying, too many guys probably already hitting up all the cuties, thus the cuties become stuck up lol.